for My one4/21/2002 c1 
122Mistress Jakira
:) Now this is a good feeling! I definitely got a little wave of smile-ness (uh, yeah...I've got writer's block, so sue me lol) when I read this, and your metaphor "You opened my heart as vast as the sea" is quite original. :) I've never heard the sea being paralleled to that before. Very neat. ^_^ Originality is one of the best parts of poetry, or any writing for that matter. ^_^ Do keep writing. :) ~MJ
122Mistress Jakira:) Now this is a good feeling! I definitely got a little wave of smile-ness (uh, yeah...I've got writer's block, so sue me lol) when I read this, and your metaphor "You opened my heart as vast as the sea" is quite original. :) I've never heard the sea being paralleled to that before. Very neat. ^_^ Originality is one of the best parts of poetry, or any writing for that matter. ^_^ Do keep writing. :) ~MJ