for Colorful World12/29/2022 c1 
73mary.okeeffe.16
It's beautiful.
Reminds me of Louis Armstrong's What A Wonderful World.
73mary.okeeffe.16It's beautiful.
Reminds me of Louis Armstrong's What A Wonderful World.
10/15/2012 c1 Guest
Another great one. You could replace damn with darn, or just leave it. I especially like the added on rap. It makes it unique.
Another great one. You could replace damn with darn, or just leave it. I especially like the added on rap. It makes it unique.
7/1/2004 c1 Mallery
Good writing, but I think there should be a poem about a white girl who has complexs about her race, because white girls can have complexes just as girls of other ethnic backrounds can. I know because as a white girl with extreamly pale skin, I am extreamly ashamed of my race and I would give anything to be dark skinned and dark haired. Who wants to look like everyone else? To me a few taunts would be a small price to pay for the beauty uniqueness and mysteriousness of other races.
Good writing, but I think there should be a poem about a white girl who has complexs about her race, because white girls can have complexes just as girls of other ethnic backrounds can. I know because as a white girl with extreamly pale skin, I am extreamly ashamed of my race and I would give anything to be dark skinned and dark haired. Who wants to look like everyone else? To me a few taunts would be a small price to pay for the beauty uniqueness and mysteriousness of other races.
4/7/2004 c1 Kewen
Very nice :)
I totally agree with Elise Donovan and her comments to walatriplang. What really big words? Maybe that review was meant for something else?
These are great lyrics with a great message, so well done!
Very nice :)
I totally agree with Elise Donovan and her comments to walatriplang. What really big words? Maybe that review was meant for something else?
These are great lyrics with a great message, so well done!
6/9/2003 c1 14Trapped-Bird
THat (like all your others) was absolutly breath taking, if you have a good voice you should seriously go all out and try to get a record deal ^_~ good luck *thumbs up*
14Trapped-BirdTHat (like all your others) was absolutly breath taking, if you have a good voice you should seriously go all out and try to get a record deal ^_~ good luck *thumbs up*
5/11/2000 c1 Elise Donovan
This is for walatriplang who wrote that stupid review. First of all what the heck are you talking about by saying she used big words? The biggest word I can see she used is "indicate" which to me "indicates" that you must have a very low vocabulary level in order to have trouble reading this song. Secondly, Britney Spears ? NO WAY! Please! That's a laugh if I ever heard one! Not EVERYONE who writes music wants to be her you know. For you're info Britney doesn't even write her own songs and couldn't write this one even if someone sat her down with a dictionary AND theasaurus! It's also evident to me from one of your other reviews I've seen here that you must not like pop music very much. Well get over it! A song when READ is simply an expression of emotions. Labeling it anything else without actually hearing the way it's suppose to sound does injustice to both the writing and the author. And as far as I'm concerned Mia doesn't need to TRY to sound like some "deep and eloquent lyricist" because she already is! You're just a VERY BAD reader!
This is for walatriplang who wrote that stupid review. First of all what the heck are you talking about by saying she used big words? The biggest word I can see she used is "indicate" which to me "indicates" that you must have a very low vocabulary level in order to have trouble reading this song. Secondly, Britney Spears ? NO WAY! Please! That's a laugh if I ever heard one! Not EVERYONE who writes music wants to be her you know. For you're info Britney doesn't even write her own songs and couldn't write this one even if someone sat her down with a dictionary AND theasaurus! It's also evident to me from one of your other reviews I've seen here that you must not like pop music very much. Well get over it! A song when READ is simply an expression of emotions. Labeling it anything else without actually hearing the way it's suppose to sound does injustice to both the writing and the author. And as far as I'm concerned Mia doesn't need to TRY to sound like some "deep and eloquent lyricist" because she already is! You're just a VERY BAD reader!
5/11/2000 c1 walatriplang
o-kaaay . . . y'know what i think? i think you're trying just a TAD bit too hard at trying to sound like you're some deep and eloquent lyricist . . . your use of "really big words" just don't flow with the rest of the song . . . and then there's all that stuff about your hair and your tan . . . that just completely throws the reader off . . . first you're trying to be deep and then you've got the britney spears effect taking over . . . needs lotsa work
o-kaaay . . . y'know what i think? i think you're trying just a TAD bit too hard at trying to sound like you're some deep and eloquent lyricist . . . your use of "really big words" just don't flow with the rest of the song . . . and then there's all that stuff about your hair and your tan . . . that just completely throws the reader off . . . first you're trying to be deep and then you've got the britney spears effect taking over . . . needs lotsa work
5/2/2000 c1 sara
it's all gravy.
it's all gravy.
4/19/2000 c1 Paige
I love this song, all the lyrics are great! keep writing!
I love this song, all the lyrics are great! keep writing!
4/11/2000 c1 Xebot
The song doesn't clearly explain what the author is so pissed about, which prevents the reader from sharing in the emotion (angst?) The first verse should be more concrete. The song hints at racial/generational issues, while still playing it way too safe to hold interest. Further, the author states several times "I don't care..." If the author doesn't care, then what's the point? I'd suggest a re-write using examples from the author's own experience, rather than "white-washed" generalities and empty platitudes. Just my opinion...
The song doesn't clearly explain what the author is so pissed about, which prevents the reader from sharing in the emotion (angst?) The first verse should be more concrete. The song hints at racial/generational issues, while still playing it way too safe to hold interest. Further, the author states several times "I don't care..." If the author doesn't care, then what's the point? I'd suggest a re-write using examples from the author's own experience, rather than "white-washed" generalities and empty platitudes. Just my opinion...
4/11/2000 c1 Jalin Muhammud Jackson
I completely disagree with Xebot. I think this song is clear enough in it's generalization. In fact, I think Xebot was too critical in his evaluation. It's talking about multiple issues, and it's hard to get down to multiples in a song that should only last a total of 3-4 minutes. Angst? Try frustration. That's what I sensed coming from the author. And if anyone's ever been discriminated against for any reason they often will remember clinging to the old stand-bye of "I don't care, it doesn't bother me." That doesn't mean it actually DOESN'T bother the individual. It's a way to ignore the pain. I don't mind in the least that the song plays it safe. Not everything needs to be so specific in life. In fact, it sounds to me like she's been quite specific, "some people like to think that they're in charge with the power to indicate what others do"? How can you not get the gist of that? And, in this day and age, that sentence rings quite true. People talk about you, try to tell you how to live your life, want you to be who they expect you to be 'else they won't accept you. The first part clearly states the things that some people do while the second half lists the petty reasons why people do it. The chorus reiterates the fact that she doesn't like it, it hurts, but at the same time is basically saying 'what else can I do but ignore you?" She's lashing back. I respect her for that. It actually helps me see her as a more complete person. She's standing up for everyone who's ever been picked on in general and to do that she can't possible get TOO specific. Mia, if you read this review somehow, don't touch the song! It's great just the way it is. "'White-washed' generalities and empty platitudes", Xebot? Ha! Hey, Mia! "Some people like to hide behind big words too" *laughs* Don't pay attention to him (or her). Like you say in the song, not everyone has to like it. But I know I do :-) And that's MY opinion...
I completely disagree with Xebot. I think this song is clear enough in it's generalization. In fact, I think Xebot was too critical in his evaluation. It's talking about multiple issues, and it's hard to get down to multiples in a song that should only last a total of 3-4 minutes. Angst? Try frustration. That's what I sensed coming from the author. And if anyone's ever been discriminated against for any reason they often will remember clinging to the old stand-bye of "I don't care, it doesn't bother me." That doesn't mean it actually DOESN'T bother the individual. It's a way to ignore the pain. I don't mind in the least that the song plays it safe. Not everything needs to be so specific in life. In fact, it sounds to me like she's been quite specific, "some people like to think that they're in charge with the power to indicate what others do"? How can you not get the gist of that? And, in this day and age, that sentence rings quite true. People talk about you, try to tell you how to live your life, want you to be who they expect you to be 'else they won't accept you. The first part clearly states the things that some people do while the second half lists the petty reasons why people do it. The chorus reiterates the fact that she doesn't like it, it hurts, but at the same time is basically saying 'what else can I do but ignore you?" She's lashing back. I respect her for that. It actually helps me see her as a more complete person. She's standing up for everyone who's ever been picked on in general and to do that she can't possible get TOO specific. Mia, if you read this review somehow, don't touch the song! It's great just the way it is. "'White-washed' generalities and empty platitudes", Xebot? Ha! Hey, Mia! "Some people like to hide behind big words too" *laughs* Don't pay attention to him (or her). Like you say in the song, not everyone has to like it. But I know I do :-) And that's MY opinion...
4/11/2000 c1 Raven Ford
I got the impression that the writer is trying to say that its through their own ignorance that they tease her about the way she looks and what not. They pick on her because she is different from them. Which brings truth to the comment about ignorance. People will pick on things that do not fit into their little worlds or guide lines.
I got the impression that the writer is trying to say that its through their own ignorance that they tease her about the way she looks and what not. They pick on her because she is different from them. Which brings truth to the comment about ignorance. People will pick on things that do not fit into their little worlds or guide lines.
4/11/2000 c1 Leah A. Moffatt
This song rules! Mia rules. You go girl! hehe *snaps fingers around in a circle* I seen your other songs too. They're also pretty cool.
This song rules! Mia rules. You go girl! hehe *snaps fingers around in a circle* I seen your other songs too. They're also pretty cool.
4/11/2000 c1 the assmaster
this cupcake was kickass! it was awesome! damn i got the message and this is my type a cupcake! get this published or some kinda cupcake! I wanna hear this song on the radio! it was really good! Get Marylin Manson to sing it... wait, actually don't, but get it published this kicked ass!
this cupcake was kickass! it was awesome! damn i got the message and this is my type a cupcake! get this published or some kinda cupcake! I wanna hear this song on the radio! it was really good! Get Marylin Manson to sing it... wait, actually don't, but get it published this kicked ass!