for Not Gonna, Don't Wanna10/15/2012 c1 Guest
Verse 2 was either missed or put as Verse 3. This is a good song. I can imagine a band singing it.
Verse 2 was either missed or put as Verse 3. This is a good song. I can imagine a band singing it.
10/15/2012 c1 Guest
Verse 2 was either missed, or you put Verse 2 as Verse 3. It's a great song. I can imagine it being sung at a concert or the like. This would be a good band song.
Verse 2 was either missed, or you put Verse 2 as Verse 3. It's a great song. I can imagine it being sung at a concert or the like. This would be a good band song.
9/28/2011 c1 Klainelover1125
I love the song. When I was singing it to myself, I sung it as a pop song is that how it's supposed to be sung.
I love the song. When I was singing it to myself, I sung it as a pop song is that how it's supposed to be sung.
12/8/2006 c1 
138iliveinadreamworld
You are so talented at writing songs. I wish I could write as well!
138iliveinadreamworldYou are so talented at writing songs. I wish I could write as well!
5/3/2006 c1 cloudsarenull
I could see someone famous singing this song. I just kinda ignored the 1 to 3 thing but still, it was awsome!
I could see someone famous singing this song. I just kinda ignored the 1 to 3 thing but still, it was awsome!
3/24/2006 c1 40Ice Dagger
Where's verse two?Other than that, I love the rhyme scheme, and you use simple diction to really land a good right hook in the jaw of your reader. Beautifully written and I really hope I hear it someday.
40Ice DaggerWhere's verse two?Other than that, I love the rhyme scheme, and you use simple diction to really land a good right hook in the jaw of your reader. Beautifully written and I really hope I hear it someday.
6/9/2003 c1 14Trapped-Bird
Hey! this is really good like all your other songs ^-^ the only thing that gets to me is the Bridge which has an odd resemblance to Bye,Bye,Bye by N'Sync
14Trapped-BirdHey! this is really good like all your other songs ^-^ the only thing that gets to me is the Bridge which has an odd resemblance to Bye,Bye,Bye by N'Sync
11/17/2002 c1 Guest
i thought it was gay. ur all pussy eaters
i thought it was gay. ur all pussy eaters
4/11/2000 c1 Jalin Muhammud Jackson
Now this song is the jam! I see a combination of pop/R&B here. Mia definitely has some TALENT! I could just picture Whitney Houston or Faith Evans singing this! I should send this one to my ex! Hahaha!
Now this song is the jam! I see a combination of pop/R&B here. Mia definitely has some TALENT! I could just picture Whitney Houston or Faith Evans singing this! I should send this one to my ex! Hahaha!
4/11/2000 c1 the assmaster
this cupcake kicked ass, its a lot like that new stuff that be coming out... sounds like something destiny's child would write, and just as good.
ANd this is my type of cupcake. I liked this song.
this cupcake kicked ass, its a lot like that new stuff that be coming out... sounds like something destiny's child would write, and just as good.
ANd this is my type of cupcake. I liked this song.
4/11/2000 c1 Steph
cool song. i lov ur lyrics in the songs u write. theyre awesome!
cool song. i lov ur lyrics in the songs u write. theyre awesome!