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1AcidGirl
This is so simple, yet it shines with brilliance. Its great, I love the way the middle three lines of each verse are repeated, its a really great effect. Great job, nicely done.
1AcidGirlThis is so simple, yet it shines with brilliance. Its great, I love the way the middle three lines of each verse are repeated, its a really great effect. Great job, nicely done.
4/2/2002 c1 122Mistress Jakira
That's very good! ^_^ I like the repetition, it makes something more of the poem somehow, and how you changed the first and last lines throughout each verse. Very sweet, too. ^_^ Good job! ~MJ
122Mistress JakiraThat's very good! ^_^ I like the repetition, it makes something more of the poem somehow, and how you changed the first and last lines throughout each verse. Very sweet, too. ^_^ Good job! ~MJ