for Alone7/10/2007 c1 
14pandafoot105
wow! that was a really great ending! I like how you brought up paranioa at the end again to wrap up, that was very well done! Um, i also read your profile, so you live in Florida too! For some reason I always seem to assume the people on here are from far away, even though I know some of my friends come on :) I live on the Atlantic Coast. It's 85 degrees, feels hotter, and is really humid. Keep up the good work (especially with the awesome ryming!)
cheers,
pandafoot
14pandafoot105wow! that was a really great ending! I like how you brought up paranioa at the end again to wrap up, that was very well done! Um, i also read your profile, so you live in Florida too! For some reason I always seem to assume the people on here are from far away, even though I know some of my friends come on :) I live on the Atlantic Coast. It's 85 degrees, feels hotter, and is really humid. Keep up the good work (especially with the awesome ryming!)
cheers,
pandafoot
1/26/2005 c1 22Xiaou Nem
Sounds like a Linkin Park lyric. Interesting with the repetition. Rhyming is not that usual in angst poems (as I have seen, but freeform is, after all, my thing) but it works well here. It's very good - very intense.(You reviewed my work a long time ago. I decided to go look for your now, three years later :) thank you for reviewing. You deserve praise more than I do.)Not only is there end rhymes, there are also these typical song rhymes (in-rhymes?) like: "haunting me; taunting me". Admittedly, there are some spelling mistakes. You should check that.
22Xiaou NemSounds like a Linkin Park lyric. Interesting with the repetition. Rhyming is not that usual in angst poems (as I have seen, but freeform is, after all, my thing) but it works well here. It's very good - very intense.(You reviewed my work a long time ago. I decided to go look for your now, three years later :) thank you for reviewing. You deserve praise more than I do.)Not only is there end rhymes, there are also these typical song rhymes (in-rhymes?) like: "haunting me; taunting me". Admittedly, there are some spelling mistakes. You should check that.
8/2/2002 c1 21Bobo
omg! That was really amazing! The way you work with words actually makes me envious! This poem made me think of two things, besides the message, 1) it sounds like a song, with the repeating verses (nice touch ;) ) but, a song by Linkin Park, that really appealed to me; 2) I really, really, REALLY! want to write this as a song-fic\poem-fic. It would be perfect. I already have the idea in my head... actually, I don't think writing fan-fics to other people's fics are allowed... Hmm... I'll have to look into it. If it is allowed, I'll e-mail you, I guess. Stunning job! ~ Bobo ~
21Boboomg! That was really amazing! The way you work with words actually makes me envious! This poem made me think of two things, besides the message, 1) it sounds like a song, with the repeating verses (nice touch ;) ) but, a song by Linkin Park, that really appealed to me; 2) I really, really, REALLY! want to write this as a song-fic\poem-fic. It would be perfect. I already have the idea in my head... actually, I don't think writing fan-fics to other people's fics are allowed... Hmm... I'll have to look into it. If it is allowed, I'll e-mail you, I guess. Stunning job! ~ Bobo ~
6/2/2002 c1 Darkangel-mysticat
I agree...can be very hard to tell who's with you and who's not, these days.
I agree...can be very hard to tell who's with you and who's not, these days.
5/11/2002 c1 112Raine2
This one is just...wow. I feel like this exactly with my mother..thanks for writing this..once again, its a awesome poem. Keep writing!
112Raine2This one is just...wow. I feel like this exactly with my mother..thanks for writing this..once again, its a awesome poem. Keep writing!
5/11/2002 c1 Brittney BLAG
Hey Lisa! This is an awesome poem. Its one of my favs youve wrote. *looks at everyone* THIS IS MY BEST FRIEND! see how talanted she is ^^ well n e wayz. Awesome poem lis. ttyl on aol. Buh bye/Lylas
Hey Lisa! This is an awesome poem. Its one of my favs youve wrote. *looks at everyone* THIS IS MY BEST FRIEND! see how talanted she is ^^ well n e wayz. Awesome poem lis. ttyl on aol. Buh bye/Lylas
5/5/2002 c1 65Maria Gv
This was one kickin poem... the repeating of those four lines make it seem like it's CRYING to be a song! I can see myself sing to along with these words. I love this poem! Excellent job! ^_^
And sorries it took me soo long to come and review some of your work. ^_~
Note: the poem had a nice topic, the thought of being alone.. feeling like everyone seems to be out to get you and other such things that make life hard and somewhat painful to endure. ^_^ Well done.
65Maria GvThis was one kickin poem... the repeating of those four lines make it seem like it's CRYING to be a song! I can see myself sing to along with these words. I love this poem! Excellent job! ^_^
And sorries it took me soo long to come and review some of your work. ^_~
Note: the poem had a nice topic, the thought of being alone.. feeling like everyone seems to be out to get you and other such things that make life hard and somewhat painful to endure. ^_^ Well done.
5/2/2002 c1 4Evil-Chicken-Wrath
whoa...intense. You have got talent, stuff like this will surely allow you to become that writer you wish to be! ^_^
4Evil-Chicken-Wrathwhoa...intense. You have got talent, stuff like this will surely allow you to become that writer you wish to be! ^_^