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10/11/2005 c1 13Shadowhound
interesting story. i would advise separating it into two chapters, and elaborate on eachnew chapter. try not to give alot of info. quickly, like when you basically skipped right past Malson's apprenticeship. just elaborate and it will make the story more realistic.
3/9/2005 c1 Guest
Good story, needs more chapters and a little more adventure though.
9/4/2000 c1 Jo
That was SOOO good! I really enjoyed it!

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