
1/24/2006 c4 anonymous
planning on continuing this, luv? please do.
planning on continuing this, luv? please do.
1/23/2006 c4
10Finger Dingbat
love it, most deff. charecters, writing, thumbs up. just one thing about ur improv thing. okay, what would happen if some ppl started kissing durning a show? lol, jk jk, but yeah... r u part of an improv team? where do you guys show? it might not even be in my country (canada) but wth, i've only seen one or two acutl improv shows. but um... have you ever head of DI (destanation imaganation) i'm acutlly on a improv team there, which isn't all straght 4ward imporv... but yeah... now i'm just rambaling. aniwas, never heard of DI ? look it up. o well, a anwser 2 ze question would be nice but um... dont have to.

love it, most deff. charecters, writing, thumbs up. just one thing about ur improv thing. okay, what would happen if some ppl started kissing durning a show? lol, jk jk, but yeah... r u part of an improv team? where do you guys show? it might not even be in my country (canada) but wth, i've only seen one or two acutl improv shows. but um... have you ever head of DI (destanation imaganation) i'm acutlly on a improv team there, which isn't all straght 4ward imporv... but yeah... now i'm just rambaling. aniwas, never heard of DI ? look it up. o well, a anwser 2 ze question would be nice but um... dont have to.
9/14/2005 c4
2Shonen Nagasaki
Oh my Good Golly Gosh! That was so sweet! I think that was so cute! Please continue writing as well as you do now!

Oh my Good Golly Gosh! That was so sweet! I think that was so cute! Please continue writing as well as you do now!
9/11/2004 c4
6Starlite Nightfall
OMG! I love it..this is great, oh yeah, mhmm, awesome, totally. WOnderful. LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! YEY FOR LOVE! I wanna know what's goin on behind the scenes! continue the story! Please? I know it's beenlike..FOREVER...ER...ER...R..R.r.. but...YOU CAN DO IT!

OMG! I love it..this is great, oh yeah, mhmm, awesome, totally. WOnderful. LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! YEY FOR LOVE! I wanna know what's goin on behind the scenes! continue the story! Please? I know it's beenlike..FOREVER...ER...ER...R..R.r.. but...YOU CAN DO IT!
8/12/2004 c4
139Raven-ember
Aw! They're adorable! Luke is so sweet! And Simon is too cute! So please by all means continue!

Aw! They're adorable! Luke is so sweet! And Simon is too cute! So please by all means continue!
8/15/2003 c4 Toni
kekeke.. i think it's cute.. but poor Simon... heh. the only problem I see isnt one because it's just my own pet peeve about names that tend to be way to original. heh. ^^;
kekeke.. i think it's cute.. but poor Simon... heh. the only problem I see isnt one because it's just my own pet peeve about names that tend to be way to original. heh. ^^;
8/13/2003 c4
19NotEnough
Damn his father's a bit messed up. Luke is really adorable. He's so nice, dealing with it the way he did. I'm glad Simon is happy, seems he NEEDS to be for once.
Well, i liked it, i liked it a lot. Heh.

Damn his father's a bit messed up. Luke is really adorable. He's so nice, dealing with it the way he did. I'm glad Simon is happy, seems he NEEDS to be for once.
Well, i liked it, i liked it a lot. Heh.
7/19/2003 c3 Cannibalistic Smurf
this story is great, so PLEASE! make chappy 4 soon? I want to see what happens next 0_0
this story is great, so PLEASE! make chappy 4 soon? I want to see what happens next 0_0
7/19/2003 c2 Cannibalistic Smurf
I know I haven't reviewed, but I LOVEZEZEZEZEZ this story! please make the next chappy 4 soon, or I shall cry!
I know I haven't reviewed, but I LOVEZEZEZEZEZ this story! please make the next chappy 4 soon, or I shall cry!
3/15/2003 c3 Sasha
More, Please!
More, Please!