
2/4/2003 c1
68camena animi
into vampyrism by chance? but that is quite good imagery is great as well as the flow and the word usage

into vampyrism by chance? but that is quite good imagery is great as well as the flow and the word usage
12/10/2002 c1
1Darkflare
Normally I don't go in for this kind of stuff, but...this is really good. Fluffishness ^_^

Normally I don't go in for this kind of stuff, but...this is really good. Fluffishness ^_^
4/7/2002 c1 allie cole
Hmm...the vampire bit was a litle unexpected. Kind of cool though, gives it a dark touch in an otherwise melancholy poem. Nice twist. :)
-ali
Hmm...the vampire bit was a litle unexpected. Kind of cool though, gives it a dark touch in an otherwise melancholy poem. Nice twist. :)
-ali
3/31/2002 c1
29Sarah aka DEVI
wow...that is pretty deep...I really enjoyed it..keep up the amazing work

wow...that is pretty deep...I really enjoyed it..keep up the amazing work
3/31/2002 c1 Anukis
Nice! Though kinda makes me think of vampires...but I like the image that this poem give to you...keep it up!
Nice! Though kinda makes me think of vampires...but I like the image that this poem give to you...keep it up!
3/30/2002 c1
37ForgottenWonder
It's wonderful! and yes i am messed up, but hey, it runs in the family to my knowledge (my great unlce was a cannibal) i love your poetry, it's so sad yet i can see the full picture in my head. Oh, i hate preps to, i hate even more when they try to dress like a goth, or a punk cause it was in their most valued teen magazine. Over and out.

It's wonderful! and yes i am messed up, but hey, it runs in the family to my knowledge (my great unlce was a cannibal) i love your poetry, it's so sad yet i can see the full picture in my head. Oh, i hate preps to, i hate even more when they try to dress like a goth, or a punk cause it was in their most valued teen magazine. Over and out.