for The Actor5/19/2002 c1 dragongirlG
Very nice. I can't wait to find out what happens. Maybe there are two sides of Bryan...he's revealed or something? Well, update soon!
Very nice. I can't wait to find out what happens. Maybe there are two sides of Bryan...he's revealed or something? Well, update soon!
4/21/2002 c1 zinc5 still too lazy to sign in
WHY AREN'T YOU UPDATING? HUH? YOU BETTER WRITE MORE OR I'LL SICK MY FLYING MONKEYS ON YOU!
WHY AREN'T YOU UPDATING? HUH? YOU BETTER WRITE MORE OR I'LL SICK MY FLYING MONKEYS ON YOU!
4/8/2002 c1 
8IvyDragon
This was great! I have a guess... maybe he just can't see the dark person, because they're dark? Or not... Anyway, this is a cool story! One question, what happened to the ball? Explain that please. Is he still on the tennis court? If so, which side of the net are the two people on? Okay, basically what I'm trying to say is that there are a few loose threads in there that probably shouldn't be loose. But other than that this is a very good intro! I'm intruiged! Keep writing!
~Ivy
8IvyDragonThis was great! I have a guess... maybe he just can't see the dark person, because they're dark? Or not... Anyway, this is a cool story! One question, what happened to the ball? Explain that please. Is he still on the tennis court? If so, which side of the net are the two people on? Okay, basically what I'm trying to say is that there are a few loose threads in there that probably shouldn't be loose. But other than that this is a very good intro! I'm intruiged! Keep writing!
~Ivy
3/30/2002 c1 1rainbow-fruit-salad
kewl! thats kinda funky, i wanna find out what happens...please update soon!
1rainbow-fruit-saladkewl! thats kinda funky, i wanna find out what happens...please update soon!