for Shattered Glass9/7/2003 c10 Kihru
lol! Aw man I really gotta do my home work...Iny miny mieni mo...WAIT! This is a no brainer! Your story's way better!
lol! Aw man I really gotta do my home work...Iny miny mieni mo...WAIT! This is a no brainer! Your story's way better!
9/7/2003 c6 Kihru
YAY! Ok i'm addicted! I still haven't done my homework but I can't stop reading your story! lol!
YAY! Ok i'm addicted! I still haven't done my homework but I can't stop reading your story! lol!
9/7/2003 c2 Kihru
OH I love this! It's great! A dream? All the best stories are born in dreams! Lol!
Anyways! I only spotted on mistake and it was minor! Keep up the great work!
OH I love this! It's great! A dream? All the best stories are born in dreams! Lol!
Anyways! I only spotted on mistake and it was minor! Keep up the great work!
8/26/2003 c13 chris
Hah it is Adrian isnt it and I bet the bugger with the weird voice is Daemon*coughs*thats only cuz hes a bastard right now*chuckles*but I wont know untill I know right*shrugs*Anyway very good chapter Oh brave Brynn!. I can't wait to read your next chapter and if I could steal time for you to write and upload I would*smiles*anyway amzing story and I luv ya lots by the way hows your summer been?
Hah it is Adrian isnt it and I bet the bugger with the weird voice is Daemon*coughs*thats only cuz hes a bastard right now*chuckles*but I wont know untill I know right*shrugs*Anyway very good chapter Oh brave Brynn!. I can't wait to read your next chapter and if I could steal time for you to write and upload I would*smiles*anyway amzing story and I luv ya lots by the way hows your summer been?
8/26/2003 c12 chris
Whats with Adrian..mood swings or what..lol. I was beginning to like Daemon he seemed nice untill turned nasty(weird glass guld guys*shakes her head*)I like the hall but I was slightly confused were there just the tiles on the floor or statues and painting?*shrugs*Good chapter yet again I look foreward to reading the next chapter which will be any minute now*grins* Keep writing!:)
Whats with Adrian..mood swings or what..lol. I was beginning to like Daemon he seemed nice untill turned nasty(weird glass guld guys*shakes her head*)I like the hall but I was slightly confused were there just the tiles on the floor or statues and painting?*shrugs*Good chapter yet again I look foreward to reading the next chapter which will be any minute now*grins* Keep writing!:)
8/26/2003 c11 chris
Garsh darn bullies always picking on people!...hehehe anyway another great chapter by the wonder you. Thats really weird the wraiths getting all physco and I can't wait to figure out what happened. Poor Brynn
Garsh darn bullies always picking on people!...hehehe anyway another great chapter by the wonder you. Thats really weird the wraiths getting all physco and I can't wait to figure out what happened. Poor Brynn
8/8/2003 c4 
10DrunkenMonkeyKing
Great story so far, you've really got me interested. I noticed that while you have really good descriptive terms, and dialogue, your sentences seem a little choppy. It's not bad, nor does it detract from the writing in any way, but usually people want a hint on how to make their writing better, and that's the only thing I could think of. Like I said, good work, and this is going straight into my favorites.
10DrunkenMonkeyKingGreat story so far, you've really got me interested. I noticed that while you have really good descriptive terms, and dialogue, your sentences seem a little choppy. It's not bad, nor does it detract from the writing in any way, but usually people want a hint on how to make their writing better, and that's the only thing I could think of. Like I said, good work, and this is going straight into my favorites.
8/8/2003 c2 DrunkenMonkeyKing
This is a great story so far, and I have to admit that some of my stories have been inspired by dreams too. Well, hey, gotta listen to your subconscious right?
This is a great story so far, and I have to admit that some of my stories have been inspired by dreams too. Well, hey, gotta listen to your subconscious right?
7/25/2003 c12 7Firebird
Well this chapter seemed to create more questions then answers (you have a knack for that) but it's very good. I think Adrian just acts tough to cover up for something. Basically only when he thinks other peoplee will be watching. Once again, I can't wait for more.
7FirebirdWell this chapter seemed to create more questions then answers (you have a knack for that) but it's very good. I think Adrian just acts tough to cover up for something. Basically only when he thinks other peoplee will be watching. Once again, I can't wait for more.
7/20/2003 c11 Firebird
Oh! Man I have so many questions right now. Plus, I'm really anxious about the next chapter. Is she really going to get in trouble? That really wouldn't be fair. She really should talk to her wraiths more though. She'd be able to figure out what's going on faster is she did (well, at least that's my guess). She'll certainly have a lot to put in her journal. That was weird that there was an area just for the glass guild. I don't know why but I still get the feeling that the glass guild isn't particularly good. Maybe that's just because I'm out of my element and things just seem odd to me. Curious about why she's surrounded in darkness. I mean she shouldn't have wraiths who like her if she's bad so...*shrug* Very odd...but very good. Looking forward to more!
Oh! Man I have so many questions right now. Plus, I'm really anxious about the next chapter. Is she really going to get in trouble? That really wouldn't be fair. She really should talk to her wraiths more though. She'd be able to figure out what's going on faster is she did (well, at least that's my guess). She'll certainly have a lot to put in her journal. That was weird that there was an area just for the glass guild. I don't know why but I still get the feeling that the glass guild isn't particularly good. Maybe that's just because I'm out of my element and things just seem odd to me. Curious about why she's surrounded in darkness. I mean she shouldn't have wraiths who like her if she's bad so...*shrug* Very odd...but very good. Looking forward to more!
7/20/2003 c10 Firebird
Oh more fun stuff. You always write such good chapters. Anyhoo, she seems to be one of the more talented students which is a good sign. Love and Wind, I'm as curious as the students to find out more about the wraiths. I guess I'll read on!
Oh more fun stuff. You always write such good chapters. Anyhoo, she seems to be one of the more talented students which is a good sign. Love and Wind, I'm as curious as the students to find out more about the wraiths. I guess I'll read on!