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3/20/2003 c1 217MistrissD
You totally captured the act of crying, excellent job ^.^
5/11/2002 c1 17allibabab
Ahhh! Perfect! My favorite line was the very last one! Marvelous, dear!
5/4/2002 c1 buggie
exactly, my friend. You have nailed it. very nice.
4/9/2002 c1 Guess who.Padfoot
OOOH! The best one yet! Keep up the writing!

*Padfoot* of Padfoot and Moony0
4/7/2002 c1 32NiKiTa-G
:) great poem
4/4/2002 c1 3Star Dust6
Hey! I like your poem! I guess that's how I feel when i cry...i really like it! Good luck on your other stories!
4/4/2002 c1 7YoungRL
I really like this poem, and I like the rhyming sceme you used. Good poem! Thanks for reviewing =]
3/31/2002 c1 22Gevo
I love it. Btw, thanx for reviewing my haiku.

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