for The Rose6/10/2003 c1 
11flash-rules
You held it together well, even if it didn't rhyme. The starting lines were brilliant!
11flash-rulesYou held it together well, even if it didn't rhyme. The starting lines were brilliant!
12/15/2002 c1 Moi
When I saw the title of this poem, I immediately thought about the song called The Rose. Obviously this is totally different. After reading your other poetry, I almost expected you to mention the rose's thorns. Guess I was wrong. Good good!
When I saw the title of this poem, I immediately thought about the song called The Rose. Obviously this is totally different. After reading your other poetry, I almost expected you to mention the rose's thorns. Guess I was wrong. Good good!
9/15/2002 c1 47Black Rose4
That is cool...I have found so many people who have written about roses like me. Keep writing!
47Black Rose4That is cool...I have found so many people who have written about roses like me. Keep writing!
8/26/2002 c1 2Torz
I love that one! Especially coz my middle name is Rose. I especially like yellow roses-but who gives?
2TorzI love that one! Especially coz my middle name is Rose. I especially like yellow roses-but who gives?
8/18/2002 c1 1R. Washburn
Woo, I love roses. I guess this is kind of like what they mean to you, right? Well, it's beautiful, and I likes. ^_^
1R. WashburnWoo, I love roses. I guess this is kind of like what they mean to you, right? Well, it's beautiful, and I likes. ^_^
7/25/2002 c1 Lisa
*tears* beautiful! :D i love flowers, and that has so much feeling inside of it. So much meaning for such a simple thing.
*tears* beautiful! :D i love flowers, and that has so much feeling inside of it. So much meaning for such a simple thing.
7/24/2002 c1 Amber
I like the imagery-you have tremendous talent for one so young. I saw only one point in 'The Rose' that didn't really flow. Comparing to blood something you also compare to peace, happiness, and celestial bodies.
I like the imagery-you have tremendous talent for one so young. I saw only one point in 'The Rose' that didn't really flow. Comparing to blood something you also compare to peace, happiness, and celestial bodies.
6/6/2002 c1 Yamerarenai
A really accurate description of the rose. If you close your eyes and have someone read this to you, you can really picture the rose clearly..
A really accurate description of the rose. If you close your eyes and have someone read this to you, you can really picture the rose clearly..
4/29/2002 c1 Kayleigh
this describes it so well, your poems are very good
this describes it so well, your poems are very good