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5/27/2007 c1 wyckydgoddess
nice

:)
6/10/2003 c1 11flash-rules
Wow! You can really see everything hen you read it. I actually got chills when I read "Lies the hypnotic music of the icy waterfall"! :)
12/15/2002 c1 Moi
Nice...
9/30/2002 c1 Cobby
I have this bad habit of drifting away in class, and this kind of reminds me of how it's like to snap out of a daydream:)
9/15/2002 c1 user
Hi i saw u on neopets and decided to review a poem. i like this one: "the Disapearing Scene" its really good. It seems like everything is a dream so pretty and once u blink its all gone. Or maybe it means that somethings r too goo to be true..i dunno ne wayz i lik e it! good job!
9/7/2002 c1 Matissa
Instead of the crisp breeze, I think you should have put the 'delicate breeze' and in place of the 'delicate leaves' you should have put 'crisp leaves'. But other then that, it's a very beautiful poem. Not cheesy at all!
5/17/2002 c1 14Aquarius Nie
Sounds very pretty
4/29/2002 c1 Kayleigh
This is a great poem, it is discribedso well you can imagine it
4/28/2002 c1 Hi8
COOL!
4/19/2002 c1 San's Old Sn
I can just picture it now! Great Work!
3/31/2002 c1 84saaio
that's cool...i can almost hear the water! lol
3/31/2002 c1 22Gevo
This poem is like music, I like the rhythm of it. You should write more, you really should!

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