for The Disappearing Scene6/10/2003 c1 
11flash-rules
Wow! You can really see everything hen you read it. I actually got chills when I read "Lies the hypnotic music of the icy waterfall"! :)
11flash-rulesWow! You can really see everything hen you read it. I actually got chills when I read "Lies the hypnotic music of the icy waterfall"! :)
12/15/2002 c1 Moi
Nice...
Nice...
9/30/2002 c1 Cobby
I have this bad habit of drifting away in class, and this kind of reminds me of how it's like to snap out of a daydream:)
I have this bad habit of drifting away in class, and this kind of reminds me of how it's like to snap out of a daydream:)
9/15/2002 c1 user
Hi i saw u on neopets and decided to review a poem. i like this one: "the Disapearing Scene" its really good. It seems like everything is a dream so pretty and once u blink its all gone. Or maybe it means that somethings r too goo to be true..i dunno ne wayz i lik e it! good job!
Hi i saw u on neopets and decided to review a poem. i like this one: "the Disapearing Scene" its really good. It seems like everything is a dream so pretty and once u blink its all gone. Or maybe it means that somethings r too goo to be true..i dunno ne wayz i lik e it! good job!
9/7/2002 c1 Matissa
Instead of the crisp breeze, I think you should have put the 'delicate breeze' and in place of the 'delicate leaves' you should have put 'crisp leaves'. But other then that, it's a very beautiful poem. Not cheesy at all!
Instead of the crisp breeze, I think you should have put the 'delicate breeze' and in place of the 'delicate leaves' you should have put 'crisp leaves'. But other then that, it's a very beautiful poem. Not cheesy at all!
4/29/2002 c1 Kayleigh
This is a great poem, it is discribedso well you can imagine it
This is a great poem, it is discribedso well you can imagine it