for Legends No Nihon4/6/2002 c4 Mabel Is K
'tis lovely, mayhap a bit o' confusion fer a while but none other then a lil' bit. Aye?
'tis lovely, mayhap a bit o' confusion fer a while but none other then a lil' bit. Aye?
4/6/2002 c4 Fiore Chnudth
Very describtive which is a definete plus. Also an ok story-line.
However I think that you may provide too many information very fast and in too quick succession; especially in the beginning - lots of names.
Generally speaking: Good story.
Very describtive which is a definete plus. Also an ok story-line.
However I think that you may provide too many information very fast and in too quick succession; especially in the beginning - lots of names.
Generally speaking: Good story.
4/5/2002 c3 Selece
Very graphic and gory, yet very well planned out.
Begin very interesting, second chapter was a slightly slow, yet still good and the third chapter was stupendous.
Very graphic and gory, yet very well planned out.
Begin very interesting, second chapter was a slightly slow, yet still good and the third chapter was stupendous.
4/4/2002 c3 
3Dancing-Firetoes
Ha, this is so mysterious. Who's the dud killing the dragons? I'm intrigued! I will definitely check back to read more because now you have me hooked! It's quite a wierd coincidence that I began reading a Japanese based story today, my brother is in Japan at the moment! Cool huh?
3Dancing-FiretoesHa, this is so mysterious. Who's the dud killing the dragons? I'm intrigued! I will definitely check back to read more because now you have me hooked! It's quite a wierd coincidence that I began reading a Japanese based story today, my brother is in Japan at the moment! Cool huh?
4/4/2002 c1 4oreokooky9
hey! thanks for reviewing my story! i read your snas do far its good! im very intruiged! i had to read the first two sentences a ocuple of times though. sort of confusing. just make it more comprihensible and dont pack to much info in such a small paragraph. but i love it so far! keep going!
4oreokooky9hey! thanks for reviewing my story! i read your snas do far its good! im very intruiged! i had to read the first two sentences a ocuple of times though. sort of confusing. just make it more comprihensible and dont pack to much info in such a small paragraph. but i love it so far! keep going!
4/3/2002 c1 Glass Malibu
This is really good so far! I read this because I saw your name on a review of my friend Reisi's story, and it's great! I enjoy stories based on the culture of the Japanese...mine is like that, though I believe most of it is incorrect. Oh well! Keep it comin'! Ja! ^_^ Love, Peace, and Ketchup! Trigun Forever!
This is really good so far! I read this because I saw your name on a review of my friend Reisi's story, and it's great! I enjoy stories based on the culture of the Japanese...mine is like that, though I believe most of it is incorrect. Oh well! Keep it comin'! Ja! ^_^ Love, Peace, and Ketchup! Trigun Forever!
3/31/2002 c1 holy cow1
I knew this would come eventually! I knew it! I am good... *ignoring the fact that she has been told by the author of this already* I am good and I'm proud of it! next chapter please, waiting not very patiently here. come on! more quickly before I die!*ignoring the fact that she hasn't updated her own story in a long time herself and is being a hyprocrite*
I hate the voices in my head... don't you? ^_^
*ignoring the fact that the voices are what are preventing her from being completely insane right now*
shut up. *ignoring the fact that...* shut up. Now. *fine*
I knew this would come eventually! I knew it! I am good... *ignoring the fact that she has been told by the author of this already* I am good and I'm proud of it! next chapter please, waiting not very patiently here. come on! more quickly before I die!*ignoring the fact that she hasn't updated her own story in a long time herself and is being a hyprocrite*
I hate the voices in my head... don't you? ^_^
*ignoring the fact that the voices are what are preventing her from being completely insane right now*
shut up. *ignoring the fact that...* shut up. Now. *fine*