
7/7/2016 c9 Guest
It has been long time...12 years?
This has been such as amazing story... sad to see it had been discontinued.
ANY hope that you would come back and give use a new chapter.
Unfortunate. I hope someday you would atleast try to complete this.
It has been long time...12 years?
This has been such as amazing story... sad to see it had been discontinued.
ANY hope that you would come back and give use a new chapter.
Unfortunate. I hope someday you would atleast try to complete this.
8/28/2013 c9 Cookie Seller
This is rather good, weldone.
This is rather good, weldone.
9/16/2011 c9 Sara
Update! This is killing me! It is sooo gooood!
Update! This is killing me! It is sooo gooood!
12/15/2010 c9
1roslintower
Wow...totally amazing. Brilliant writing. Just one thing - it's a bit hard to tell when you've changed POV. Yeah, I know it's in third person, but there's no indication that you've stopped writing about Alex and Caireatha and moved on to what's happening to Marcia.

Wow...totally amazing. Brilliant writing. Just one thing - it's a bit hard to tell when you've changed POV. Yeah, I know it's in third person, but there's no indication that you've stopped writing about Alex and Caireatha and moved on to what's happening to Marcia.
12/5/2010 c9 AranaBanana
Hello!
It's too bad you've abandonned this story, it was really interesting. But thank you for atleast sharing these chapters with us.
Hello!
It's too bad you've abandonned this story, it was really interesting. But thank you for atleast sharing these chapters with us.
4/2/2008 c9
4Misplaced Angel
wow. i really like this story. its origional :) and really ... interesting. i was honestly disappointed to findout that you havent updated. soo please, update soon.
Misplaced Angel

wow. i really like this story. its origional :) and really ... interesting. i was honestly disappointed to findout that you havent updated. soo please, update soon.
Misplaced Angel
3/3/2008 c9 RunFree
Please update...
Please update...
1/30/2008 c9
1glamoureste
Woah. Woah WOAH...
What the HELL?
It just stops right there?
And an update hasn't been made in over three and a half years?
ARG... I wish you would update. but it seems as if you have abandoned this story :[
It was getting REALY interesting!

Woah. Woah WOAH...
What the HELL?
It just stops right there?
And an update hasn't been made in over three and a half years?
ARG... I wish you would update. but it seems as if you have abandoned this story :[
It was getting REALY interesting!