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8/17/2003 c1 16kaika switched
Pretty depressing fairy tale, but I suppose that a lot of teenagers these days feel depressed. Great piece. Keep writing!
9/17/2002 c1 29Honey Kitten
I like it! I think it's really cute. It flows nicely too. Awesome job! :)
4/20/2002 c1 natasha
wow, its realy good! n i can relate 2 most of it...u shud publish sum of ur work!
4/9/2002 c1 50Kittioto
METAPHORS! Goodness mamamia pepperoni and cheese pizza - I love your poetry! You're never coming off my favorites list. ^_^** Greatness, as usual, prevails in this piece! I love all your metaphorical stuff
4/3/2002 c1 48Midnight01
Flows like a river. ;-) Nice too. I think with writing like this, and emotion enough to write it...Well, you'll succeed.
4/2/2002 c1 6AnneKStarr
Hey i like the whole ever other or such rhymign pattern. and i like the whole story poem, its so realistic, like most fairy tales arent.

*kay

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