for The Terror from Within2/21/2003 c2 Aisling Grey
Despite the typos and extra words that aren't needed, your story is good, it has real potential. I would like to see you continue this.
Despite the typos and extra words that aren't needed, your story is good, it has real potential. I would like to see you continue this.
1/28/2003 c2 
18CassieMR
OMGSH that is soooo freaky! Keep writing... I am reading this at night but fortunately I'm not home alone. Good job and hurry up!
18CassieMROMGSH that is soooo freaky! Keep writing... I am reading this at night but fortunately I'm not home alone. Good job and hurry up!
4/5/2002 c2 ikhan11
oooooooooooo, scary. Write more.
Hmmmmmm, up or down, up or down? ME and my friend think that staying down would be better.
oooooooooooo, scary. Write more.
Hmmmmmm, up or down, up or down? ME and my friend think that staying down would be better.
4/4/2002 c2 12Miss Kiki
Brrr...got chills up my spine! Ever seen "Scream"? Reminds me of that. As for continuing, you'll have to go with your own instincts. :P I'll read it if you write it!
12Miss KikiBrrr...got chills up my spine! Ever seen "Scream"? Reminds me of that. As for continuing, you'll have to go with your own instincts. :P I'll read it if you write it!
4/2/2002 c1 hudsiyfiusnfsudi
UPDATE! Man that is creepy! you have to update soon, it`s cruil to let people hang like this!
~Akkiko Lente
UPDATE! Man that is creepy! you have to update soon, it`s cruil to let people hang like this!
~Akkiko Lente