for Black Phoenix9/26/2013 c16 Immortal3lla
LOVE this story!
aww man this chapter was good, the last bit with Syrian cradled in Rians arms and those 'i love you' flashbacks was soo emotional, that and having a sad song playing lame waterworks :sniffle:
LOVE this story!
aww man this chapter was good, the last bit with Syrian cradled in Rians arms and those 'i love you' flashbacks was soo emotional, that and having a sad song playing lame waterworks :sniffle:
2/1/2012 c18 
6R.P. Ann
digosdihfgoidhfgoi I loved it ((heart)) so fucking cute. I loved this story truly, one of my faves! ISHDGOHISDFG Sooooooooooooo gooooooooood. You're an amazing author :D I love Rian! He's so cute!
And the end with the ring and everything omg reminds of my two best guy friends.. well Ian and Jason are more like my brothers... Well, when Jason proposed to Ian (YESTERDAY OMG. SUCH A COINCIDENCE! SDIUFHDFUGH) he said it lightly so that if Ian said no it wouldn't hurt that much, but like Ian started crying and Jason said: " I'm serious...sure its not a conventional way to propose but..." and Ian cried harder so Jason thought he said the wrong thing and he was all nervous because he thought it was too sudden because even tho' they know each other since they are 15 they started dating this year but then Ian was like: "I love you Jason, I love you, with all my heart, with every little thing that is me. I want you, and I need you forever. I do. I do. I do." and I was like: "OMG " it was a shame that Ian's twin brother wasn't there :/ only Ro and I were :/ ...Jason is like... Ro's ex... and Ian's mine... but like... we were so happy when they got together we became they're number 1 fans! aodfihsdofhgdd They are just too cute! And we support them 140%!
Sorry for odifhgo making it so long (the story about Ian and Jason) but odfihgohig I had to tell someone else!
6R.P. Anndigosdihfgoidhfgoi I loved it ((heart)) so fucking cute. I loved this story truly, one of my faves! ISHDGOHISDFG Sooooooooooooo gooooooooood. You're an amazing author :D I love Rian! He's so cute!
And the end with the ring and everything omg reminds of my two best guy friends.. well Ian and Jason are more like my brothers... Well, when Jason proposed to Ian (YESTERDAY OMG. SUCH A COINCIDENCE! SDIUFHDFUGH) he said it lightly so that if Ian said no it wouldn't hurt that much, but like Ian started crying and Jason said: " I'm serious...sure its not a conventional way to propose but..." and Ian cried harder so Jason thought he said the wrong thing and he was all nervous because he thought it was too sudden because even tho' they know each other since they are 15 they started dating this year but then Ian was like: "I love you Jason, I love you, with all my heart, with every little thing that is me. I want you, and I need you forever. I do. I do. I do." and I was like: "OMG " it was a shame that Ian's twin brother wasn't there :/ only Ro and I were :/ ...Jason is like... Ro's ex... and Ian's mine... but like... we were so happy when they got together we became they're number 1 fans! aodfihsdofhgdd They are just too cute! And we support them 140%!
Sorry for odifhgo making it so long (the story about Ian and Jason) but odfihgohig I had to tell someone else!
12/8/2011 c18 avidmoonstar
Wow. I'm not quite sure what to say. This story was so beautifully written and eloquent. I couldn't stop reading! I loved that the romance aspect of the story was so understated. It's very refreshing to read a non-cliched story that didn't take place in high school! When I come across a rare story like this it inspires me to write.
Wow. I'm not quite sure what to say. This story was so beautifully written and eloquent. I couldn't stop reading! I loved that the romance aspect of the story was so understated. It's very refreshing to read a non-cliched story that didn't take place in high school! When I come across a rare story like this it inspires me to write.
7/22/2011 c18 Fumiki
Oh my god, this is so sweet! I love Rian, he's just so sweet.
After you explained the whole reason why his father did what he did, it kinda make sense. He tried to save the one he love, by killing them and send them to heaven.
Syrian is an interesting character... what with forgetting his name every morning after he woke up? lol
Several chapter, mainly the last three made me cry. I'm glad you didn't decide to end this story in dramatic way... cause I might hire Guy to kill you. lol
anyway... I FKING LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE!
Oh my god, this is so sweet! I love Rian, he's just so sweet.
After you explained the whole reason why his father did what he did, it kinda make sense. He tried to save the one he love, by killing them and send them to heaven.
Syrian is an interesting character... what with forgetting his name every morning after he woke up? lol
Several chapter, mainly the last three made me cry. I'm glad you didn't decide to end this story in dramatic way... cause I might hire Guy to kill you. lol
anyway... I FKING LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE!
10/4/2010 c18 blackrose214
aw - wonderful story - thanks for these enjoyable hours. Rian and Syrian are honestly great characters and so this goes straight to my favs. ^_^
aw - wonderful story - thanks for these enjoyable hours. Rian and Syrian are honestly great characters and so this goes straight to my favs. ^_^
5/4/2009 c18 strawberry buttercup
it's been so long since i've read a nice, sappy, heartfelt mxm story. i must have missed this one. it's just so aw. cute, and i love the plot, twisted. And every girl totally digs the knight in shining armour business, so well done.
it's been so long since i've read a nice, sappy, heartfelt mxm story. i must have missed this one. it's just so aw. cute, and i love the plot, twisted. And every girl totally digs the knight in shining armour business, so well done.
3/22/2008 c18 AlastrinaMeadow
I just took the most amazing password retrieving test ever, but your story tops the amazingness. I absolutely LOVED it!
I just took the most amazing password retrieving test ever, but your story tops the amazingness. I absolutely LOVED it!
6/7/2007 c18 Ophelia
This is the third or fourth time I've read Black Phoenix (the first time was at least a year ago), and each time it just gets better and better.
I can say with utter honesty that I absolutely love this story. The characters are so real and captivating, and you weave the plot seamlessly with the emotions. The psychological aspects are brilliantly effective as well, and add a depth to the story that lifts it above and beyond.
I just want to thank you, profusely, for writing Black Phoenix. It is (and you are) one of a kind.
This is the third or fourth time I've read Black Phoenix (the first time was at least a year ago), and each time it just gets better and better.
I can say with utter honesty that I absolutely love this story. The characters are so real and captivating, and you weave the plot seamlessly with the emotions. The psychological aspects are brilliantly effective as well, and add a depth to the story that lifts it above and beyond.
I just want to thank you, profusely, for writing Black Phoenix. It is (and you are) one of a kind.
1/3/2007 c18 blueberrysundae
Absolutely loved it! Great job! It was dark in a very realistic and believable way, with out being overly angsty or dramatic.
Absolutely loved it! Great job! It was dark in a very realistic and believable way, with out being overly angsty or dramatic.
9/5/2006 c18 Shizuka
That...really brought tears to my eyes. I can't even begin to explain how happy you've made me by writing this. I really loved the characters. It was such a great ending too. All in all, I'd say that this is one of the most wonderful things I've ever read.
That...really brought tears to my eyes. I can't even begin to explain how happy you've made me by writing this. I really loved the characters. It was such a great ending too. All in all, I'd say that this is one of the most wonderful things I've ever read.
7/26/2006 c18 zoule
There were definitely tears in my eyes when I was reading this. *sniff* It's such a sweet story. And I'm glad syrian didn't die.
There were definitely tears in my eyes when I was reading this. *sniff* It's such a sweet story. And I'm glad syrian didn't die.
3/24/2006 c16 Prisoner-11
'Then the police open fired on my father. He had a weapon, he had used it, and they had no choice...His body jerked from every impact as if he was dancing some horrific dance...'Right about here I realized that I was shouting 'Yay!' all through the paragraph.
'Then the police open fired on my father. He had a weapon, he had used it, and they had no choice...His body jerked from every impact as if he was dancing some horrific dance...'Right about here I realized that I was shouting 'Yay!' all through the paragraph.
11/11/2005 c17 Amour Amorita Saphira
Hihi^^ Sorry for the late review. Well, the story's really interesting and I egt to see alot of views and feelings from the chracter and you actually did it quiet well^^ I could feel like when he's feeling yet he's quiet numb but sometimes I have to re-read some of the sentences then only I'll go Aw or Ohh or gasp and the part I love most is in the abandone warehouse. It's so intense, sickning =P, suspicious, saw a new light in some characters and answers answered^^ I was so absorb init I actually cried, gasp and was Aww come on and all those stuff... yeah... and I wonder who's fault is it..=P hehehe
Now is the letter part, It's so freakin' sad. You made me cry at the end again... It's so saddening and really depressing! How could you! atleast we have a really better ending,ne?^^ YES! ^^ hehe. well, it's really late over here^^ I'll be reading the last chapter tomorrow!Can't wait. The suspends eating me but I feel like a dead fish right now...=P Ciaoz^^
Hihi^^ Sorry for the late review. Well, the story's really interesting and I egt to see alot of views and feelings from the chracter and you actually did it quiet well^^ I could feel like when he's feeling yet he's quiet numb but sometimes I have to re-read some of the sentences then only I'll go Aw or Ohh or gasp and the part I love most is in the abandone warehouse. It's so intense, sickning =P, suspicious, saw a new light in some characters and answers answered^^ I was so absorb init I actually cried, gasp and was Aww come on and all those stuff... yeah... and I wonder who's fault is it..=P hehehe
Now is the letter part, It's so freakin' sad. You made me cry at the end again... It's so saddening and really depressing! How could you! atleast we have a really better ending,ne?^^ YES! ^^ hehe. well, it's really late over here^^ I'll be reading the last chapter tomorrow!Can't wait. The suspends eating me but I feel like a dead fish right now...=P Ciaoz^^
8/23/2005 c18 wing
beautiful! absolutely wonderful, this is one of the best stories i've ever read! It was so absolutely perfect, there's absolutely nothing to be changed... I know i'm reviewing late, but... heh. Wonderful! I want to read this over and over again, it's so perfect! You are one of the best authoresses ever. Keep it up. :) Congratulations! And thank you very much for a great read. This was wonderful.
beautiful! absolutely wonderful, this is one of the best stories i've ever read! It was so absolutely perfect, there's absolutely nothing to be changed... I know i'm reviewing late, but... heh. Wonderful! I want to read this over and over again, it's so perfect! You are one of the best authoresses ever. Keep it up. :) Congratulations! And thank you very much for a great read. This was wonderful.