for State Fair11/26/2003 c1 
52Will Klemm
Questioning is good in all types of writing, but a suggestion is to answer those questions to make the poem even better. Which of course you did. the stream of conscienceness writing here is done well in here too. Rather enjoy this poem.
52Will KlemmQuestioning is good in all types of writing, but a suggestion is to answer those questions to make the poem even better. Which of course you did. the stream of conscienceness writing here is done well in here too. Rather enjoy this poem.
12/2/2002 c1 1Fly Without Wings
I'm going to my first show on Sunday. I hope I do okay. Love the poem. I t describes how I feel now.
1Fly Without WingsI'm going to my first show on Sunday. I hope I do okay. Love the poem. I t describes how I feel now.
4/6/2002 c1 Tsunami
state fair is nerve wracking? Just going out on a trail ride with YOU is nerve wracking!
Tsu
p.s. oh yea. i was possed to tell ya it was good, wasn't i? It suxs! Just kidding! Don't kill me! I like scaryfree days! It was good!
state fair is nerve wracking? Just going out on a trail ride with YOU is nerve wracking!
Tsu
p.s. oh yea. i was possed to tell ya it was good, wasn't i? It suxs! Just kidding! Don't kill me! I like scaryfree days! It was good!