3/13/2004 c1 16picadillopoe
Why do the funniest stories always happen at Wal-Mart? I suppose it's something to consider.
This is a great story. You really allow the reader to get into Sarah's head, and none of your characters are cardboard. Not to mention that it's hillarious.
Thanks for a great read.

8/13/2003 c1 6Otternutter
Hehe that story made me smile and laugh! Great! I liked the way it was written- kinda relaxed tone but totally understood where the character was comin from without it being too serious! Great stuff! Keep at it :o)

7/24/2003 c1 3grilledcheesequeen
Never has a holiday been so horribly humorous! That tops the time my great-aunt Pauline fell into Grandmother's turkey, flailing so as to knock over the candles and start a fire on the tablecloth. I can't wait to see more Sarah and Jane escapades!

Jagurandi

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7/1/2003 c1 Syd
Hehehe. Amen! Great story. :)

7/26/2002 c1 1Taydagreat
Since the other two yahoos put up a review of this I feel compelled to do so myself. I don't agree with Sam cause I like the cliff hanger ending myself. I do agree with Ace cause I can definitely relate and I can also see this actually happening to you. Keep up the good work and the good writing...you make me laugh so much. If I keep laughing at this rate..I'll be as skinny as Sam in no time. (j/k)

Shawnta'

4/12/2002 c1 1aceinit
Hilarious and well-written. I think most of us can relate to this *loving family holiday.* Keep it up, girl, can't wait to see what else you come up with. "You da pig!"