for Until Forever6/14/2006 c1 
32Blue Hearted Butterfly
Why such a sad story? It's so heart breaking. (But all sad relationship stories to me are heart breaking.) But it has good discription. Keep up the good work!
32Blue Hearted ButterflyWhy such a sad story? It's so heart breaking. (But all sad relationship stories to me are heart breaking.) But it has good discription. Keep up the good work!
1/11/2005 c1 1Itazuki Gunn
I gotta say, not bad. But, it could be better, explaining her past or something near the beginning. Other then that, I really think you did a wondeful job, the description was BEAUTIFUL. I love it, not bad. Just, the suggestion isni't that big a deal since the mystery is great.
1Itazuki GunnI gotta say, not bad. But, it could be better, explaining her past or something near the beginning. Other then that, I really think you did a wondeful job, the description was BEAUTIFUL. I love it, not bad. Just, the suggestion isni't that big a deal since the mystery is great.
9/11/2000 c1 K. Wyse
Interesting, to say the least. Nice twist.
C-ya!
Wyse
Interesting, to say the least. Nice twist.
C-ya!
Wyse