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7/3/2016 c1 AbyssScript
Okay. Nice start, but I do not understand those symbols at all. I have a feeling you were going for quotation marks and apostrophes, but ended up with that instead. Perhaps try changing the settings for your keyboard? I always have to change mine when I write because the standard is set to replace my symbols with French accents. There isn't anything wrong with that, just that it is not what I'm looking for usually.

Anyways, look forward to chapter two and the proper introduction with the "Queen" character.
6/14/2006 c1 22Kohlomere
Where's the step-mother, dwarves, climax resolution? And what's with the weird trademark signs? You have quite a Mary Sue there. Work harder, E.
8/22/2003 c1 Midnight Owl
so beautiful!
4/12/2002 c1 6Rodaine Rodune
I am somewhat confused...yet...it was well out and perfectly bond to todays times. Try writing more 'today stories' from old fairy tales...I'd like to read some

::With Faith...Nothing is Impossible::

Rodaine Rodune
4/12/2002 c1 83Zemmiphobic
wow this is so very very great- you have such talent- much much better than any other retelling of snow white i've ever heard- GREAT job- this is going in my favs

Love Always

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