for Pleading Prayer10/13/2003 c1 
10Inoperative
oh that's soo sad...it's really very touching, i nearly cried 0_o
i liked the way you formatted it, nice wording particularly the last two words - they were so strong and a nice ending.
very good...and i can't think of anything else to say...hmm...
10Inoperativeoh that's soo sad...it's really very touching, i nearly cried 0_o
i liked the way you formatted it, nice wording particularly the last two words - they were so strong and a nice ending.
very good...and i can't think of anything else to say...hmm...
10/24/2002 c1 Judith Keylimepie85
I can see why you cried...so sad but really awesome. It is really great and I admire it when a writer can make people cry. *sniff* *tear tear* Who me? Crying? *sniffle* *sob* no way!
I can see why you cried...so sad but really awesome. It is really great and I admire it when a writer can make people cry. *sniff* *tear tear* Who me? Crying? *sniffle* *sob* no way!
5/25/2002 c1 1Sick Little Fiend
*Lip trembles* That was beautiful... s-so s-sad... WAAAH! *Run away crying*
1Sick Little Fiend*Lip trembles* That was beautiful... s-so s-sad... WAAAH! *Run away crying*
5/21/2002 c1 7Ragnarok2
wow, that's really good. i thought it was really sad and the way you wrote is just so great I can't explain it really. very good poetry. :-)
7Ragnarok2wow, that's really good. i thought it was really sad and the way you wrote is just so great I can't explain it really. very good poetry. :-)
5/19/2002 c1 17Jade6
Oh! This is so sad, powerful and moving! Truly touching! I can't express how much it spoke to me... I am speechless... a very emotional piece and I love it! =)
17Jade6Oh! This is so sad, powerful and moving! Truly touching! I can't express how much it spoke to me... I am speechless... a very emotional piece and I love it! =)
5/17/2002 c1 26Jade the Expert Predator
I have no words that come to mind to express how I feel about this... Beautifully done. That's the only one I can think of. I like how you only capitalized God, as if you were signifying how much he means here. 8)
26Jade the Expert PredatorI have no words that come to mind to express how I feel about this... Beautifully done. That's the only one I can think of. I like how you only capitalized God, as if you were signifying how much he means here. 8)
5/13/2002 c1 55Fire of the Vampire
Wow. Brought me to tears, and I would have seriously been bawling if I weren't in Computer Tech class right now. This is amazing. I can see why it's one of your favorites. Very good. Breathtaking.
God Bless
Much Love
Later Daze
- Kacie
55Fire of the VampireWow. Brought me to tears, and I would have seriously been bawling if I weren't in Computer Tech class right now. This is amazing. I can see why it's one of your favorites. Very good. Breathtaking.
God Bless
Much Love
Later Daze
- Kacie