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10/13/2003 c1 10Inoperative
oh that's soo sad...it's really very touching, i nearly cried 0_o

i liked the way you formatted it, nice wording particularly the last two words - they were so strong and a nice ending.

very good...and i can't think of anything else to say...hmm...
11/10/2002 c1 ShireElf
*sniffle* Wow, that was beautiful. You write really good poetry!
10/24/2002 c1 Judith Keylimepie85
I can see why you cried...so sad but really awesome. It is really great and I admire it when a writer can make people cry. *sniff* *tear tear* Who me? Crying? *sniffle* *sob* no way!
8/10/2002 c1 90SweetGrape
So sad!

It creeps into your heart and then breaks it!
5/25/2002 c1 1Sick Little Fiend
*Lip trembles* That was beautiful... s-so s-sad... WAAAH! *Run away crying*
5/21/2002 c1 7Ragnarok2
wow, that's really good. i thought it was really sad and the way you wrote is just so great I can't explain it really. very good poetry. :-)
5/19/2002 c1 17Jade6
Oh! This is so sad, powerful and moving! Truly touching! I can't express how much it spoke to me... I am speechless... a very emotional piece and I love it! =)
5/17/2002 c1 26Jade the Expert Predator
I have no words that come to mind to express how I feel about this... Beautifully done. That's the only one I can think of. I like how you only capitalized God, as if you were signifying how much he means here. 8)
5/13/2002 c1 55Fire of the Vampire
Wow. Brought me to tears, and I would have seriously been bawling if I weren't in Computer Tech class right now. This is amazing. I can see why it's one of your favorites. Very good. Breathtaking.

God Bless

Much Love

Later Daze

- Kacie
4/23/2002 c1 6NicAbriGz
too sad- ver y nice- thoughtful- cried- u know thats hard to make me do- luv ya like a sista-

4/17/2002 c1 Liller
ooo.. dark and emotional. i like it!

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