
12/27/2002 c1
10Patrick Gillespie
I liked the way you told the story. The fast paced narrative made things go by really quickly and brought out the character's attitude. I didn't get the message at the end, but I'm guessing it ties in somewhere with some of your other stuff. Anyway, good job.

I liked the way you told the story. The fast paced narrative made things go by really quickly and brought out the character's attitude. I didn't get the message at the end, but I'm guessing it ties in somewhere with some of your other stuff. Anyway, good job.
12/16/2002 c1 The same one that you know from Peace
I think the one version you got at your eterni-web is sooo much better.. ;o)
I think the one version you got at your eterni-web is sooo much better.. ;o)