for Just Think4/26/2002 c1 Rini
its deep, you're good at putting emotions into your work, and thats what makes poems great. I like this one a lot.
its deep, you're good at putting emotions into your work, and thats what makes poems great. I like this one a lot.
4/22/2002 c1 
12All Mighty Terrestrial
Wow. That was INTENSE. I liked the way each line was like a jagged facet of the larger idea, like trying to put broken glass back together in your mind. Very cool.
12All Mighty TerrestrialWow. That was INTENSE. I liked the way each line was like a jagged facet of the larger idea, like trying to put broken glass back together in your mind. Very cool.
4/18/2002 c1 101seared flesh
really great poem! i've been there and you got the emotions perfect! and the imagery was well thought out! good job...r&R mine if you don't care...c-ya
101seared fleshreally great poem! i've been there and you got the emotions perfect! and the imagery was well thought out! good job...r&R mine if you don't care...c-ya
4/17/2002 c1 41WalkingOnWater
woah...this was actually not what i expected to read for some odd reason...grr, "ok nikki, get back on track will ya! Dryad, sad poems, Nikki, rude and obnoxious crap" ok, got my head straight again! that was totally tense! i liked the way you put the words together and how you said you were like dying but you needed support and stuff from someone you loved, that had an interesting twist.
41WalkingOnWaterwoah...this was actually not what i expected to read for some odd reason...grr, "ok nikki, get back on track will ya! Dryad, sad poems, Nikki, rude and obnoxious crap" ok, got my head straight again! that was totally tense! i liked the way you put the words together and how you said you were like dying but you needed support and stuff from someone you loved, that had an interesting twist.
4/16/2002 c1 56Baby Rose1
this is really good, my favorite lines are "You're the only thing keeping me alive the one that's causing me to die" Very good poem!
~Baby Rose~
56Baby Rose1this is really good, my favorite lines are "You're the only thing keeping me alive the one that's causing me to die" Very good poem!
~Baby Rose~