for Wandering Through The Mist11/6/2000 c1 K9
Touching, definitly touching. Kinda makes me feel like I should be a better person and get out there and help people.
Touching, definitly touching. Kinda makes me feel like I should be a better person and get out there and help people.
9/27/2000 c1 
12Kate Davis
Exceptional. I can see her walking around and hear the cart and feel her pain. Also your wishes for her safety shine through, and especially since it isn't based on fact, that's quite an achievement! You have a real talent for poetry - I can't believe you're so young! Please write more.
12Kate DavisExceptional. I can see her walking around and hear the cart and feel her pain. Also your wishes for her safety shine through, and especially since it isn't based on fact, that's quite an achievement! You have a real talent for poetry - I can't believe you're so young! Please write more.
9/26/2000 c1 Six
first off, awesome title...secondly, really awesome poem...it was sad, but true...great writing : )
first off, awesome title...secondly, really awesome poem...it was sad, but true...great writing : )