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8/2/2002 c1 21Bobo
That is amazing... i ame truly inspired by what you write! Getting late... need caffine... two more left to read, then I'm printing 'em off! ~ Bobo ~
8/1/2002 c1 Sharyn1
And the monster is to be embraced because it is a part of everyone? Or is to be scorned and pushed away because of the same reason?

A poem I can truly relate to. Thank you.
6/11/2002 c1 3Cairothegreat
I, too, have a monster, that is within, and without, and a part of me. It is both darkness and light,... and I love it because it is me, and it is beautiful.
5/19/2002 c1 4Nine1
Hello, fellow angsty-poem writer ^-^' Thanks for reviewing my poem... (could you believe you were my first review EVER?)...wish I could get it out like you do. Keep it up and we can show the dumb world that angsty poetry will rule the world...hehe.
5/15/2002 c1 103Redrum
Wow. I love this poem. I also feel like their is a monster inside me, it controls my emotions. Yet I still manage to keep enough control that I don't break down in public. I leave that for when I get home. ;)
5/13/2002 c1 50Alequinn
The bad sides are just the hardest to be in control because they want so much to be free from the rules that chains them. Hee, the monster do come from within. I love the way you describe the struggle the person has to put up with every second of everyday. Wonderful, absolutely one of the best poems I've ever read! =) Keep it up!
5/13/2002 c1 soul of darkness1
cool poem!
5/12/2002 c1 26annakas
Loved it. Your poems are vey good. This one reminds me my own pem "What is it?"
4/30/2002 c1 73Eibhinn Eonach
that was so amazing! the rhyming and everything was just wonderful.. heh, i can definitely relate, which is an enormous plus in a poem, no?

BTW, thanks for reviewing my stuff... lol, forget which thing it was at the moment.

4/22/2002 c1 83Zemmiphobic
very nice- i love it!
4/21/2002 c1 26Phoenix Debonaire
I like.
4/21/2002 c1 2Black-tigress

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