
8/21/2002 c1 lisabeth
lol, i dunno where i was lookin, but i musta missed this one. i really really like it.. you should continue! :) lol, hope yer vacation is going well
lol, i dunno where i was lookin, but i musta missed this one. i really really like it.. you should continue! :) lol, hope yer vacation is going well
7/17/2002 c4
2gorillazgal86
that is an awsome story! Its not at all sterotypical and very engaging. Please update soon! This is going really good!

that is an awsome story! Its not at all sterotypical and very engaging. Please update soon! This is going really good!
7/16/2002 c4 Asitha
this is great, love it, write more soon
this is great, love it, write more soon
6/11/2002 c4
20Darcy H
Although I am annoyed by the use of "kewl," (It always feels like an 11-year-old wrote it) this is a really cute story! Please post more! This is a really great story, and you have a lot of talent!

Although I am annoyed by the use of "kewl," (It always feels like an 11-year-old wrote it) this is a really cute story! Please post more! This is a really great story, and you have a lot of talent!
6/10/2002 c4
4Mus4u
YES! I found it. I had lost it now I found it. I love you. THis is soo very real, so good. I love your wrting. and loved Gabes break down It was awesome. In the 'ohmygod poorgabe, feels like I'm him.'
CONTINUE SOOOO VERY SOONNNNNN!

YES! I found it. I had lost it now I found it. I love you. THis is soo very real, so good. I love your wrting. and loved Gabes break down It was awesome. In the 'ohmygod poorgabe, feels like I'm him.'
CONTINUE SOOOO VERY SOONNNNNN!
5/7/2002 c3
13lalalalelelel
I know you like flames, but how can i flame you when i love this story? This is soooo realistic. Write on!

I know you like flames, but how can i flame you when i love this story? This is soooo realistic. Write on!
5/3/2002 c1 Mike Jackson
After readng your story, i do not know whether to cry or throw up. Maybe i will do both, since your story only sums up to one word: crap. I've seen better come out of my ass than your story. The characters in the story are just stereotypes of what an 'anarchist'and 'goth' perceive to be. And please, if it were made into a novel, the only good it would do would to feed bonfires or to wipe my ass. In conclusion, crappy story, stop writing, don't quit your day job, and what the hell are 'skater pants'?
After readng your story, i do not know whether to cry or throw up. Maybe i will do both, since your story only sums up to one word: crap. I've seen better come out of my ass than your story. The characters in the story are just stereotypes of what an 'anarchist'and 'goth' perceive to be. And please, if it were made into a novel, the only good it would do would to feed bonfires or to wipe my ass. In conclusion, crappy story, stop writing, don't quit your day job, and what the hell are 'skater pants'?
5/3/2002 c2 Shanny
OH MY GOD. THIS STORY... IS HORRIBLE! it made me cry! you're so sterotypical! and... yeah, stuff... gross... and i thought pet sematary was graphic... ugh. well, okay, it wasn't THAT graphic, but still! it sucked so much! and it didn't even come from your heart, damn it. who the hell writes crap like that? you make this whole punk/anarchy thing to just be one huge fashion. that's so dumb! anarchy is dumb in general, because all it does is contradict itself. BUT THAT IS NOT THE POINT. the point is that this story needs to DIE... AHH... okay, done.
OH MY GOD. THIS STORY... IS HORRIBLE! it made me cry! you're so sterotypical! and... yeah, stuff... gross... and i thought pet sematary was graphic... ugh. well, okay, it wasn't THAT graphic, but still! it sucked so much! and it didn't even come from your heart, damn it. who the hell writes crap like that? you make this whole punk/anarchy thing to just be one huge fashion. that's so dumb! anarchy is dumb in general, because all it does is contradict itself. BUT THAT IS NOT THE POINT. the point is that this story needs to DIE... AHH... okay, done.
4/25/2002 c1
9Warui Warui Neko
*laughs* Yay! *Another* story! Sheez... I mean sure everyone had ideas but I'm always afriad to write them all down and post them cuz' I feel that I might 'neglect' (lol ^_^) my other stories... Oh well!
This is cute! Please continue soon! ^_~

*laughs* Yay! *Another* story! Sheez... I mean sure everyone had ideas but I'm always afriad to write them all down and post them cuz' I feel that I might 'neglect' (lol ^_^) my other stories... Oh well!
This is cute! Please continue soon! ^_~
4/21/2002 c1
18HoukanGishi
Good so far. I'd give a little more discription in those longer dialogs. You know what they're doing, stuff like that. but not much more. Like I said it was good. I'm defiantly going to keep reading it.

Good so far. I'd give a little more discription in those longer dialogs. You know what they're doing, stuff like that. but not much more. Like I said it was good. I'm defiantly going to keep reading it.
4/21/2002 c1
21Throw Me Away
Hey Draco! I dedicated something to you AT LAST! I've been trying to forever!
This is AMAZING! God.. Why do you write so good? I'm so fucking jealous!

Hey Draco! I dedicated something to you AT LAST! I've been trying to forever!
This is AMAZING! God.. Why do you write so good? I'm so fucking jealous!