for Another Child11/5/2003 c1 
7Demeter Rose
This is excellent. I wasn't sure how Sam was related to Josh until well over halfway through the story and that was somewhat confusing, but this is really great.
7Demeter RoseThis is excellent. I wasn't sure how Sam was related to Josh until well over halfway through the story and that was somewhat confusing, but this is really great.
5/20/2003 c1 54Werecat99
That was so sad... The little details of their past life, like that chain in the door added to the sadness of the story.
The poem was painfully beautiful.
And now I'm crying...
54Werecat99That was so sad... The little details of their past life, like that chain in the door added to the sadness of the story.
The poem was painfully beautiful.
And now I'm crying...
11/17/2002 c1 6Hypatia
This is really nice. I liked the feel of it and the way the characters were developed. This moved nicely and I enjoyed the hope that was given at the end of the angst. Good job.
6HypatiaThis is really nice. I liked the feel of it and the way the characters were developed. This moved nicely and I enjoyed the hope that was given at the end of the angst. Good job.
5/23/2002 c1 6Strider Hunter
Wow, Dee. Wow...that was a stunning story, and I am rarely taken aback by a story. Brief, poignant, but packed with emotion...I could FEEL that sick feeling that Sam had, alone in her apartment like that. And the poetry was very heartfelt, did you write those verses yourself?
Very, very well done...it is now one of my favorites.
Strider
6Strider HunterWow, Dee. Wow...that was a stunning story, and I am rarely taken aback by a story. Brief, poignant, but packed with emotion...I could FEEL that sick feeling that Sam had, alone in her apartment like that. And the poetry was very heartfelt, did you write those verses yourself?
Very, very well done...it is now one of my favorites.
Strider
5/1/2002 c1 Shoshie
*huggles DE* You are soooo talanted. Umm...you wanted cc, but I can't think of too much to change. It was clear, which is hard to do in an angst like this. The poem didn't flow as well as it could have. But that's just minor.
*huggles DE* You are soooo talanted. Umm...you wanted cc, but I can't think of too much to change. It was clear, which is hard to do in an angst like this. The poem didn't flow as well as it could have. But that's just minor.
4/22/2002 c1 8Ca Rinoa Toki Moro Lockheart
;.; x 1000000000000000000! I cried too! *sniffles* Possitively beautiful!
8Ca Rinoa Toki Moro Lockheart;.; x 1000000000000000000! I cried too! *sniffles* Possitively beautiful!