for Schism6/22/2003 c1 Noxcaladoxia
omg. thank you for shaving 2 years off my life lol. and im not talkin about the bad ones at the end. dude that was scary. it left me speechless.
omg. thank you for shaving 2 years off my life lol. and im not talkin about the bad ones at the end. dude that was scary. it left me speechless.
5/26/2002 c1 Akiko Manami
WHOA...This was ...COOL! A slight bit confusing around the end, but DEFINATELY worth the time it takes to read it!
WHOA...This was ...COOL! A slight bit confusing around the end, but DEFINATELY worth the time it takes to read it!
5/21/2002 c1 
3Tiffany Kremer
That was the first story that I have read on fanfic that was written in the second person. I thought you did a very nice job with that. For some reason, I can only write in the third. I tried first person but it just went downhill after the first couple paragraphs and second just looks to complicated, hehe.
Anyway, you have wonderful descriptions. I thought you described things wonderfully, painting a picture for the readers to see and letting the reader feel the emotions that you want then to feel and the pain. Very well done.
This was a great story. It really did raise the hair on the back of my neck.
And lastly, thank you for reviewing my story 'If I Can't Have You, No One Will'. I really appreciated it.
3Tiffany KremerThat was the first story that I have read on fanfic that was written in the second person. I thought you did a very nice job with that. For some reason, I can only write in the third. I tried first person but it just went downhill after the first couple paragraphs and second just looks to complicated, hehe.
Anyway, you have wonderful descriptions. I thought you described things wonderfully, painting a picture for the readers to see and letting the reader feel the emotions that you want then to feel and the pain. Very well done.
This was a great story. It really did raise the hair on the back of my neck.
And lastly, thank you for reviewing my story 'If I Can't Have You, No One Will'. I really appreciated it.
5/9/2002 c1 sushimaster
wow. thats all I can say. wow. You write very well. It most certanly is NOT an average "haunted house."
wow. thats all I can say. wow. You write very well. It most certanly is NOT an average "haunted house."