4/26/2004 c1 15NoxOnexCares
Excellent. I'm actually going through that right now, amongst many other things.
Excellent. I'm actually going through that right now, amongst many other things.
1/5/2004 c1 24HatedBlade
spooky, but we all have our problems. the way write is to alow peopel in to my world, and with this peice you did as i always try to.
spooky, but we all have our problems. the way write is to alow peopel in to my world, and with this peice you did as i always try to.
10/10/2003 c1 4SilverAndFlames
This is really amazing. It made me cry if that anything 2 go by. This really is god. Well done. :)
This is really amazing. It made me cry if that anything 2 go by. This really is god. Well done. :)
9/22/2002 c1 1Laterose
Awwwwwww Xia! I'm crying now! I wasn't going to read it anyway cos I knew I would but oh bother boo hoooooooo!
Awwwwwww Xia! I'm crying now! I wasn't going to read it anyway cos I knew I would but oh bother boo hoooooooo!
8/14/2002 c1 27mereschino
so good. i feel what you were trying to say. I know about this from personal experience as well.
so good. i feel what you were trying to say. I know about this from personal experience as well.
6/10/2002 c1 space angel
xia,
hey i know that u rite this stuff and things like that but mayb u shouldn't b so depressed bout everthing. u should look to the brighter side of life and i know lan knows wat she is doin and is perfectly happy. just remember. im ur friend, but lighten up and look at the brighter side of life.
space angel
xia,
hey i know that u rite this stuff and things like that but mayb u shouldn't b so depressed bout everthing. u should look to the brighter side of life and i know lan knows wat she is doin and is perfectly happy. just remember. im ur friend, but lighten up and look at the brighter side of life.
space angel
5/1/2002 c1 Peppermint2
This is really depressing, but it's good. Although, I don't like it as much as your other happy poems.
~Peppermint
This is really depressing, but it's good. Although, I don't like it as much as your other happy poems.
~Peppermint
4/26/2002 c1 bonnie
oh my gawd, xia, i had no idea...
oh my gawd, xia, i had no idea...
4/25/2002 c1 98Not Just a Little Girl
hi xia this is me. for the record -i don't hav an eating disorder -i'm eating an apple right now, i had breakfast, i had lots of biscuits, i had dinner and that was just today! i'm sorry about your friend libby -but i. am. not. sick. you are the only one that thinks that.
hi xia this is me. for the record -i don't hav an eating disorder -i'm eating an apple right now, i had breakfast, i had lots of biscuits, i had dinner and that was just today! i'm sorry about your friend libby -but i. am. not. sick. you are the only one that thinks that.
4/25/2002 c1 3Tiffany Kremer
*Frowns deeply after reading this*
This is an extremely sad poem... You really capture the pain. I really don't like to review poetry because it's hard to review. Usually authors have something hidden in the writing that the readers do not see and if we criticize poetry, it's criticizing their feelings, thoughts, and smotions, and even personal experiences. And like you said, it was your person experience and you told us what the secret was in your summary. I would never have guessed it was a eating disorder.
You did a wonderful job with this poem. I liked it a lot even thought it really was sad. You captured the pain and everything. Wonderful job.
*Frowns deeply after reading this*
This is an extremely sad poem... You really capture the pain. I really don't like to review poetry because it's hard to review. Usually authors have something hidden in the writing that the readers do not see and if we criticize poetry, it's criticizing their feelings, thoughts, and smotions, and even personal experiences. And like you said, it was your person experience and you told us what the secret was in your summary. I would never have guessed it was a eating disorder.
You did a wonderful job with this poem. I liked it a lot even thought it really was sad. You captured the pain and everything. Wonderful job.
4/23/2002 c1 3Naeginnie6
:'( Is this talkin bout like... a... what's it called... bolemic person? Yah, thats it. Its v sad...
:'( Is this talkin bout like... a... what's it called... bolemic person? Yah, thats it. Its v sad...