for Time5/9/2002 c1 
25nukerliu
hmm... i get it, but its really difficult to explain, and that is what makes a poem great... the reader gets it, but only YOUR words can make him understand.. good job, btw, a new poem by me is up- "I am the Universe"
25nukerliuhmm... i get it, but its really difficult to explain, and that is what makes a poem great... the reader gets it, but only YOUR words can make him understand.. good job, btw, a new poem by me is up- "I am the Universe"
4/29/2002 c1 50Kittioto
Hey, groovy! Veeery... unique! Or, as my mom would say, "Yoony-Kue". Don't ask. Er, yeah... I liked this! Metaphorical I'm asuming, very cool. ~Bobbs head~
He's a cold hearted snake! AH! Look into his eyes. Uh-oh, he's been tellin' lies! He's a lover-boy at play... OH he don't play by rules, uuutoooh... uh-oh, girl don't be the fool now.
Yes, this IS a hyper review.
50KittiotoHey, groovy! Veeery... unique! Or, as my mom would say, "Yoony-Kue". Don't ask. Er, yeah... I liked this! Metaphorical I'm asuming, very cool. ~Bobbs head~
He's a cold hearted snake! AH! Look into his eyes. Uh-oh, he's been tellin' lies! He's a lover-boy at play... OH he don't play by rules, uuutoooh... uh-oh, girl don't be the fool now.
Yes, this IS a hyper review.
4/27/2002 c1 12All Mighty Terrestrial
Another wonderful poem. Wanting to become the person you feel you should be, but fearing you will run out of time before you get there.
12All Mighty TerrestrialAnother wonderful poem. Wanting to become the person you feel you should be, but fearing you will run out of time before you get there.
4/25/2002 c1 1Damien Buck
Oo... Good poem. I'm not sure if I get it or not but I think I might. Oh and the "Laughing stars" poem was about someone looking up at the stars remembering all the times people laughed at her. I figured that out about a week ago. I'm so proud. Hehe.
1Damien BuckOo... Good poem. I'm not sure if I get it or not but I think I might. Oh and the "Laughing stars" poem was about someone looking up at the stars remembering all the times people laughed at her. I figured that out about a week ago. I'm so proud. Hehe.
4/24/2002 c1 24Vilestar
hey, your 'wind' poem you showed me today is kinda like this one but different. anyhoo i'm bored, and u know i like all your poems. oh, i mean 'stories'. BWAHAHAHHAeeeeeeeeeeee.
24Vilestarhey, your 'wind' poem you showed me today is kinda like this one but different. anyhoo i'm bored, and u know i like all your poems. oh, i mean 'stories'. BWAHAHAHHAeeeeeeeeeeee.
4/24/2002 c1 11waterprincess
Hey
Great poem
wouldnt we all like to find our selves
hey why would u like to be half yourself
time seems ssssoooooo long sometimes!
I hope u arnt' hurting
ttul
bye bye
waterprincess
11waterprincessHey
Great poem
wouldnt we all like to find our selves
hey why would u like to be half yourself
time seems ssssoooooo long sometimes!
I hope u arnt' hurting
ttul
bye bye
waterprincess