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5/9/2002 c1 25nukerliu
hmm... i get it, but its really difficult to explain, and that is what makes a poem great... the reader gets it, but only YOUR words can make him understand.. good job, btw, a new poem by me is up- "I am the Universe"
4/29/2002 c1 50Kittioto
Hey, groovy! Veeery... unique! Or, as my mom would say, "Yoony-Kue". Don't ask. Er, yeah... I liked this! Metaphorical I'm asuming, very cool. ~Bobbs head~

He's a cold hearted snake! AH! Look into his eyes. Uh-oh, he's been tellin' lies! He's a lover-boy at play... OH he don't play by rules, uuutoooh... uh-oh, girl don't be the fool now.

Yes, this IS a hyper review.
4/27/2002 c1 12All Mighty Terrestrial
Another wonderful poem. Wanting to become the person you feel you should be, but fearing you will run out of time before you get there.
4/25/2002 c1 1Damien Buck
Oo... Good poem. I'm not sure if I get it or not but I think I might. Oh and the "Laughing stars" poem was about someone looking up at the stars remembering all the times people laughed at her. I figured that out about a week ago. I'm so proud. Hehe.
4/24/2002 c1 24Vilestar
hey, your 'wind' poem you showed me today is kinda like this one but different. anyhoo i'm bored, and u know i like all your poems. oh, i mean 'stories'. BWAHAHAHHAeeeeeeeeeeee.
4/24/2002 c1 11waterprincess

Great poem

wouldnt we all like to find our selves

hey why would u like to be half yourself

time seems ssssoooooo long sometimes!

I hope u arnt' hurting


bye bye

4/24/2002 c1 Rini
very good. I like this. Keep writing

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