
5/22/2002 c1 TigerRAA
Ok, that was...weird...but you an awesome writer, even if that was sorta...yuck.
But you have a really cool style of writing. I could see and feel everything as if I was there.
Ok, that was...weird...but you an awesome writer, even if that was sorta...yuck.
But you have a really cool style of writing. I could see and feel everything as if I was there.
5/18/2002 c1
1running with scissors
Wow. This is so scary and incredible; you're an excellent writer...

Wow. This is so scary and incredible; you're an excellent writer...
4/29/2002 c1 elke
first one i've read. fantastic, disturbing yet comforting at the same time.
first one i've read. fantastic, disturbing yet comforting at the same time.
4/28/2002 c1 Penny9
I thought I post so that everyone else will know how good I thought it was. Ye gad! God you are intense when you write in the first person. I think I forgot to breath for that last bit. Wigged here. Good job getting into the mind of your character, and freaking me out.
I thought I post so that everyone else will know how good I thought it was. Ye gad! God you are intense when you write in the first person. I think I forgot to breath for that last bit. Wigged here. Good job getting into the mind of your character, and freaking me out.
4/26/2002 c1
20midnights shadow
WOW. H*** S***! very powerful! very disturbing! as it is meant to be. Great storytelling. (I will be speechless now) ********!

WOW. H*** S***! very powerful! very disturbing! as it is meant to be. Great storytelling. (I will be speechless now) ********!