for Testimony of Winter Nights3/4/2004 c1 
17invisiblebob
You have a wonderful way with words, but the story seems to be lacking something... I don't know... maybe purpose? I got the same impression when I read Dead Man Walking and Origins. They don't show your full...passion I guess. Elysium on the other hand seemed to really grab your attention; it didn't just seem to be a random idea. I don't know. You're an awesome writer though.
17invisiblebobYou have a wonderful way with words, but the story seems to be lacking something... I don't know... maybe purpose? I got the same impression when I read Dead Man Walking and Origins. They don't show your full...passion I guess. Elysium on the other hand seemed to really grab your attention; it didn't just seem to be a random idea. I don't know. You're an awesome writer though.
3/15/2003 c1 Lunar Mystic
I love your writing style-it's wonderful. Everything's near perfect, save for a single typo/spelling mistake. In the 4th to last paragraph, it says he "prided the door open"-did you mean "pried the door open?"
Other than that, your story's great-and you have incredible word usage! :)
-Luna
I love your writing style-it's wonderful. Everything's near perfect, save for a single typo/spelling mistake. In the 4th to last paragraph, it says he "prided the door open"-did you mean "pried the door open?"
Other than that, your story's great-and you have incredible word usage! :)
-Luna
2/24/2003 c1 6April2
Aw, you know, you really should write more about them, Dru. Not that I'm biased or anything. :]
6April2Aw, you know, you really should write more about them, Dru. Not that I'm biased or anything. :]
6/6/2002 c1 2Woman of the Dunedain
Obviously Kenneth is human, yes?
This is very well written. You should expand on it!
2Woman of the DunedainObviously Kenneth is human, yes?
This is very well written. You should expand on it!