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4/8/2003 c1 26Mystic Kiwi
I have a friend kinda like this. It really hurts to see them destroying them selves. THeis is wonderfully written.
10/14/2002 c1 5The Crazy Cricket
I wanna fly too! Okay, I don't want to be a pilot-but I still want to fly!

Very depressing...But very good! Great job!
9/19/2002 c1 Rose Dark Thorn
This is so very touching. Your work is excelent. Kust as good as Devine Blessings'. Beautiful. Please keep it up.
7/24/2002 c1 20midnights shadow
Poem is very good.
6/12/2002 c1 6Linmenel
I think I need to stop reading your sad stuff! But this kinda has a hopeful message in it. ::cheers up a little:: Its really good...but you talk about this friend as if he/she is real. Did this really happen? Your a good poet...gonna read some more!
5/8/2002 c1 12Daredee
Oh mi god (*oh mi god* I sound like Renee...*multiple shudders*).

I just can't think of losing you (or ne 1 of my friends) like that.

Sheila! U made me cry...

(it rules)
5/2/2002 c1 40TK Styles
Great poem you can really get a feel for the emotions in the poem. Keep up the good work. Oh and I have added four more poems, review them please. Peace

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