5/11/2002 c1 55Fire of the Vampire
Good. I like it, but as long as you try to see the bright side to life you won't always stay in the dark. Although sometimes I crouch, hidden, in the dark because the bright side of life hurts my eyes. :| But anyway this is a really good poem.
God Bless
Much Love
Later Daze
- Kacie
Good. I like it, but as long as you try to see the bright side to life you won't always stay in the dark. Although sometimes I crouch, hidden, in the dark because the bright side of life hurts my eyes. :| But anyway this is a really good poem.
God Bless
Much Love
Later Daze
- Kacie
5/9/2002 c1 Rini
I like this, great poem...I dont remember if I answered this ^^* but you asked if my poems were about the same person, yes they are. They are all about myself, and what I think, or my relationship for the sappy romance ones. Keep writing ^^
I like this, great poem...I dont remember if I answered this ^^* but you asked if my poems were about the same person, yes they are. They are all about myself, and what I think, or my relationship for the sappy romance ones. Keep writing ^^
5/9/2002 c1 41WalkingOnWater
yeah! I LOVE IT! short but great! sorry i wasn't around much, i sort of went bye bye for a while, but now i'm back and making poetry! SOO ILL SEE YOU WHEN I UPDATE! K? GREAT POEM! write some more!
yeah! I LOVE IT! short but great! sorry i wasn't around much, i sort of went bye bye for a while, but now i'm back and making poetry! SOO ILL SEE YOU WHEN I UPDATE! K? GREAT POEM! write some more!
5/3/2002 c1 1Damien Buck
That one I can definitely relate to. My poetry doesn't seem to have as much meaning and power as yours cause I'm obsessed with rhyming. It's sad. Maybe I can do better with Free verse. I guess I'll have to try it out sometime.
That one I can definitely relate to. My poetry doesn't seem to have as much meaning and power as yours cause I'm obsessed with rhyming. It's sad. Maybe I can do better with Free verse. I guess I'll have to try it out sometime.