for The Masked Man12/23/2004 c10 odisse
Hello. Love the story. plz up-date soon. thanks.
Hello. Love the story. plz up-date soon. thanks.
10/15/2003 c2 Lord Iceberg
Great story so far! I love it! The idea is really good, and I don't get bored with it! The "X hours left" is a suspenseful touch.
I can't find anything to criticise you on, except for a small grammatical error. It occurrs when Tad is talking to Damien. An opening speech mark is ALWAYS followed by a capital letter. ALWAYS. NO EXCEPTIONS.
By the way, remember me? I'm Lord Iceberg, the author of "The Spire Of Serenon" which you reviewed. I accessed your bio, and decided I'd read one of your stories. I've only read two chapters of this one today, I'll read some more later.
Note: The Spire Of Serenon has been updated, in case you're interested.
Great story so far! I love it! The idea is really good, and I don't get bored with it! The "X hours left" is a suspenseful touch.
I can't find anything to criticise you on, except for a small grammatical error. It occurrs when Tad is talking to Damien. An opening speech mark is ALWAYS followed by a capital letter. ALWAYS. NO EXCEPTIONS.
By the way, remember me? I'm Lord Iceberg, the author of "The Spire Of Serenon" which you reviewed. I accessed your bio, and decided I'd read one of your stories. I've only read two chapters of this one today, I'll read some more later.
Note: The Spire Of Serenon has been updated, in case you're interested.
7/29/2003 c6 
1HyperFalcon
WOW. Intrigue, treachery...
This is good, suspenseful writing. I'd definitely like to see how this turns out.
MegaManX
1HyperFalconWOW. Intrigue, treachery...
This is good, suspenseful writing. I'd definitely like to see how this turns out.
MegaManX
7/10/2003 c6 angela-odisse
hey luv the fic/ this chapter plz up-date soon any way see ya later. up-date up-date up-date. hehehe
hey luv the fic/ this chapter plz up-date soon any way see ya later. up-date up-date up-date. hehehe
6/25/2003 c5 38Fate Thirteen
Groovy stuff! I really liked it, and Damian's very mysterious - I guess he can use magic, then...? I hope you update this, even though you haven't in a long time...
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38Fate ThirteenGroovy stuff! I really liked it, and Damian's very mysterious - I guess he can use magic, then...? I hope you update this, even though you haven't in a long time...
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