for Childe Fable8/31/2002 c1 jenzy
oh yes. i'm beginning to revisit the bits of tingles that tickled me so when i first read this. lovely yet haunting job, sugarette.
oh yes. i'm beginning to revisit the bits of tingles that tickled me so when i first read this. lovely yet haunting job, sugarette.
8/7/2002 c1 
29Katterree Fengari
kewl poem! It's really an interesting type of writing you did...or do...I dunno yet...Olde English writing rocks...^_^
29Katterree Fengarikewl poem! It's really an interesting type of writing you did...or do...I dunno yet...Olde English writing rocks...^_^
6/24/2002 c1 Ellen
I think this is great! Scary and chilling, especially the ending, that really got me. You have fantastic images.
Keep up the amazing work, Scarr.
I think this is great! Scary and chilling, especially the ending, that really got me. You have fantastic images.
Keep up the amazing work, Scarr.
5/14/2002 c1 Lilia
Beautiful mythological references. Haunting indeed. Verra verra good.
Beautiful mythological references. Haunting indeed. Verra verra good.
5/7/2002 c1 16tash
your poems never fails to freak me out ... Fantastic elements of imagery employed ... Keep it up! :)
16tashyour poems never fails to freak me out ... Fantastic elements of imagery employed ... Keep it up! :)
5/6/2002 c1 1Trista Anne
This is one of those poems that leaves one truly at a loss for words. That is where I am, at a loss for words. You always amaze me with your talent.
I'm hard at work on your fanatic. Okay, not really, but once I finish my Writing essay, Western Civilization essay, and World History essay... I will get on it, promise ^_^
1Trista AnneThis is one of those poems that leaves one truly at a loss for words. That is where I am, at a loss for words. You always amaze me with your talent.
I'm hard at work on your fanatic. Okay, not really, but once I finish my Writing essay, Western Civilization essay, and World History essay... I will get on it, promise ^_^
5/5/2002 c1 1TeriyakiKat
ooooooooooooh, awesome! love the mood, rhymes and rhythm all great... interesting the use of archaic language. it works, though some of it is odd gramatically. overall, i love it
1TeriyakiKatooooooooooooh, awesome! love the mood, rhymes and rhythm all great... interesting the use of archaic language. it works, though some of it is odd gramatically. overall, i love it
5/5/2002 c1 3Cel
Cool lingo', Lucius! A very interesting poem, indeed.
Your submission is rather longer than my own. I guess I go rather for the terse, as you do in each of your verses.
Mine don't have :verses".
3CelCool lingo', Lucius! A very interesting poem, indeed.
Your submission is rather longer than my own. I guess I go rather for the terse, as you do in each of your verses.
Mine don't have :verses".
5/5/2002 c1 Carter Tachikawa-not logged in
Lovely poem. Beautiful from beginning to end. I must admit that I felt like I was in a trance reading this because it flows so well. Wonderful work~CT
Lovely poem. Beautiful from beginning to end. I must admit that I felt like I was in a trance reading this because it flows so well. Wonderful work~CT
5/5/2002 c1 8Infinitybliss
THIS IS AN AWESOME POEM! It remind me of Jabberwock, (hmm wonder why?) But I really like it. The way it rhymes adds to the sort of scary mood.
8InfinityblissTHIS IS AN AWESOME POEM! It remind me of Jabberwock, (hmm wonder why?) But I really like it. The way it rhymes adds to the sort of scary mood.
5/5/2002 c1 1running with scissors
Wow. This is wonderful. It flows nicely and the use of language is just beautiful. Great job.
1running with scissorsWow. This is wonderful. It flows nicely and the use of language is just beautiful. Great job.