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for The Dark Ocean

5/17/2002 c1 ur sis
That's really good manong! u should rite some more poems and u should have submitted that in the school thing. and it doesn't sound crazy.
5/13/2002 c1 Ashley
Wow! You are so phenomanel (did I spell that correctly?) well write more! PLEASE. And if it is okay, I might use your poem to draw 'pictures' to, for school. (eg: I put a verse then draw a picture about it) Cause that's what we're supposed to do for an assignment.

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Good Things: I can relate to it like a lot

Things to work on: nothin'
5/7/2002 c1 LexiGurl1
This poem is one of the best I've read. Keep up the good work!
5/7/2002 c1 8uriah
I liked this poem it has a good flow to it and I like how you describe the whole place and not just the water...it's like I can almost be there... very good

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