for What would you do?6/18/2008 c30 Elodie Wolfe
MY FAVORITEST STORY of all time. I don't like long stoies, only because I'm one of those readers who read everything in one sittig no matter what unless there was a fire, and I'd still skim the last chapters through. LOVED it. SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUL, I know your dedicated readers like me would love one.
MY FAVORITEST STORY of all time. I don't like long stoies, only because I'm one of those readers who read everything in one sittig no matter what unless there was a fire, and I'd still skim the last chapters through. LOVED it. SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUL, I know your dedicated readers like me would love one.
6/18/2008 c7 Elodie Wolfe
I'ma gonna have to see Tom Gun now, that's two stories with the movie making an appearance. Lol
Middi~
I'ma gonna have to see Tom Gun now, that's two stories with the movie making an appearance. Lol
Middi~
6/18/2008 c5 Elodie Wolfe
Wait so do they ever figure out that Casey and Kevin are the twins that Liz and Steven know? Or atleast that's what I think it is. I'm so confused. I wanna edit this one! lol
Middi~
Wait so do they ever figure out that Casey and Kevin are the twins that Liz and Steven know? Or atleast that's what I think it is. I'm so confused. I wanna edit this one! lol
Middi~
6/18/2008 c1 Elodie Wolfe
I wanna edit this one next
btw the first chapter(this one I mean) you have the exact same thing repeated twice)
Middi~
I wanna edit this one next
btw the first chapter(this one I mean) you have the exact same thing repeated twice)
Middi~
4/19/2008 c30 Hazelnut Romance
i really like ur stories. since this was the last one that i read of the 30 u wrote, i hope u can start a new one soon. I found it was really cool with ur twin/telepathic thing! update with a new story soon!
i really like ur stories. since this was the last one that i read of the 30 u wrote, i hope u can start a new one soon. I found it was really cool with ur twin/telepathic thing! update with a new story soon!
1/1/2007 c13 punkr0ckchck
ok.. yeah in chap 13 you switched the name jonathan to mark just to let you know
ok.. yeah in chap 13 you switched the name jonathan to mark just to let you know
3/27/2006 c30 Alenor
hmm...ok, it was a great story. the end was a bit abrupt but it's all good. cya later.
hmm...ok, it was a great story. the end was a bit abrupt but it's all good. cya later.
2/10/2006 c30 Ally
Your story's AWESOME! Ignore 'jojo's review he/she is just a dumbass.
Your story's AWESOME! Ignore 'jojo's review he/she is just a dumbass.
7/26/2005 c2 jojo
Your story's so damn boring!
Your story's so damn boring!
6/12/2005 c30 emerald
it was great! except the first few chapters were really fast...and too many characters and connections...you should omit some maybe- it just got really confusing...love the twin chemistry! and also love the gradual romance-nothing was out of the blue which makes it realistic (and offcourse jonathan is AMAZING!-sexy and sweet)...and maybe you should add some more detials about liz's mind processing and feelings in the first few chapters...loved it!
it was great! except the first few chapters were really fast...and too many characters and connections...you should omit some maybe- it just got really confusing...love the twin chemistry! and also love the gradual romance-nothing was out of the blue which makes it realistic (and offcourse jonathan is AMAZING!-sexy and sweet)...and maybe you should add some more detials about liz's mind processing and feelings in the first few chapters...loved it!
4/15/2005 c2 
18pinkfluffyoranges
there seems to be soemthing wrong withthis chapter atleast i think there is. it has weird sighns running through it and it is only a paragragh long plz email me if u have fixed this problem or if it isnt really a problem my email address is would really like to finnish reading this story
18pinkfluffyorangesthere seems to be soemthing wrong withthis chapter atleast i think there is. it has weird sighns running through it and it is only a paragragh long plz email me if u have fixed this problem or if it isnt really a problem my email address is would really like to finnish reading this story
8/30/2004 c30 Dawn
Just finished a marathon 3 hour read! Really terrific. Hope you get a good editor and publisher.
Just finished a marathon 3 hour read! Really terrific. Hope you get a good editor and publisher.
8/30/2004 c17 Dawn
Pneumonia
Pneumonia