
8/2/2002 c1
21Bobo
Okay, I don't give a damn if it's against the rules, I am writing somthing with this...I'll even do it WITHOUT your permission, seeing as how I'm doing it tonight :P MWAHAHAHAHA! *clams down* Okay, I shall stop scaring peoples now ^^ ~ Bobo ~

Okay, I don't give a damn if it's against the rules, I am writing somthing with this...I'll even do it WITHOUT your permission, seeing as how I'm doing it tonight :P MWAHAHAHAHA! *clams down* Okay, I shall stop scaring peoples now ^^ ~ Bobo ~
6/1/2002 c1
124Penumbra
Hmmm, very thought-provoking...especially that last line. This reminds me of a few people in my own life, but we shouldn't go there...;). Anyway, you have a lot of talent. Keep writing!

Hmmm, very thought-provoking...especially that last line. This reminds me of a few people in my own life, but we shouldn't go there...;). Anyway, you have a lot of talent. Keep writing!
5/15/2002 c1
103Redrum
Beautiful poem. I also feel this way.
-I really loved your reviews. It's good to know that I write good angst poems. I've never been the type to write poems until one of my friends said I should try.
Keep up the good angst. :) Hmm.. that don't make sense. lol ;)

Beautiful poem. I also feel this way.
-I really loved your reviews. It's good to know that I write good angst poems. I've never been the type to write poems until one of my friends said I should try.
Keep up the good angst. :) Hmm.. that don't make sense. lol ;)
5/13/2002 c1 soul of darkness1
oh my! i can completely relate! it's like the way she looks at me burns my heart and soul! it hurts! it freaking hurts! write more! please...
oh my! i can completely relate! it's like the way she looks at me burns my heart and soul! it hurts! it freaking hurts! write more! please...
5/11/2002 c1
112Raine2
I loved this one! It was totally great! I have a poem called Questions myself..but this blows mine out of the water!

I loved this one! It was totally great! I have a poem called Questions myself..but this blows mine out of the water!
5/10/2002 c1
29splotchikins
oh great poem! lot's of discription in this. it kind of scared me though the way you described how you feel when the person laughed or grinned. that person sounds scarey! but beside that, this was REALLY good! ^-^

oh great poem! lot's of discription in this. it kind of scared me though the way you described how you feel when the person laughed or grinned. that person sounds scarey! but beside that, this was REALLY good! ^-^