for Silent cries of Invisible people.3/20/2003 c1 
217MistrissD
Wow, if you really are 11, you are truly talented, keep it up! You'll progress wonderfuly, hope to read more!
217MistrissDWow, if you really are 11, you are truly talented, keep it up! You'll progress wonderfuly, hope to read more!
11/16/2002 c1 55Creative Deficit
This is really cool. maybe you could just stick in invisible people or more things to do with that 'cause it might make it even MORE powerful!My favorite parts are the ending lines. Nice Job.
55Creative DeficitThis is really cool. maybe you could just stick in invisible people or more things to do with that 'cause it might make it even MORE powerful!My favorite parts are the ending lines. Nice Job.
8/28/2002 c1 128cat-eyed-gypsy
ooooooo, i liked this one the most. very well written, and such a cool idea. all i can say really is wow. great job.
~The Cat Eyed Gypsy
128cat-eyed-gypsyooooooo, i liked this one the most. very well written, and such a cool idea. all i can say really is wow. great job.
~The Cat Eyed Gypsy