2/24/2003 c1 Metallicafangirl
Great poem. Love the title. Love the last line. Love the first line. Love the poem
Great poem. Love the title. Love the last line. Love the first line. Love the poem
8/24/2002 c1 12tanya
very beautiful..i love it...n i agree.its us who destroy ourselves with paradoxical charecters..amazing poem neway.
very beautiful..i love it...n i agree.its us who destroy ourselves with paradoxical charecters..amazing poem neway.
7/31/2002 c1 24Vilestar
i remember helping you make this one rhyme, and how your mom got mad about the last line. but it's still great.
i remember helping you make this one rhyme, and how your mom got mad about the last line. but it's still great.
5/26/2002 c1 Rini
amazing poem, well writing.. I'm sorry I can't come up with a better review than that ^^() but it is truly a great peom.
amazing poem, well writing.. I'm sorry I can't come up with a better review than that ^^() but it is truly a great peom.
5/18/2002 c1 63Lisa Robinson
Melikes it! Erm.. I can't find the words to describe it.. Very well written, Great Job!
Melikes it! Erm.. I can't find the words to describe it.. Very well written, Great Job!
5/16/2002 c1 41WalkingOnWater
omg...*sniffle* I LOVE THE TITLE! And the poem is short but...i dub this...BITTER-SWEET! CONGRATS!
omg...*sniffle* I LOVE THE TITLE! And the poem is short but...i dub this...BITTER-SWEET! CONGRATS!
5/11/2002 c1 1Damien Buck
Hmm... It's a really great poem. But... I don't really get it. I know, I know: How much of an idiot can I be? But it's true. Hehe. I guess every poet has a secret meaning in their poems that only the poet knows. Except for my case. Where even I don't get my own poetry. I just know that it's sad and that it rhymes. Hehe.
Hmm... It's a really great poem. But... I don't really get it. I know, I know: How much of an idiot can I be? But it's true. Hehe. I guess every poet has a secret meaning in their poems that only the poet knows. Except for my case. Where even I don't get my own poetry. I just know that it's sad and that it rhymes. Hehe.