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1/27/2004 c1 13Yakkorat
"In a pool of my tears" and "With the chips of my heart" are such great images. It's a nicely written poem, although I don't think I had the feel of the rhythm right. Great work, though, and I'll look forward to reading more.
Love,
Julie-Rae
10/13/2002 c1 2Prince Vejita
Icy-chan, very good poem indeed, and although you may have a writers block, I still envy your talent. In my eyes, I have none, but thats just me. The poem was very well done, I award you kudos. Farewell for now ^_- Veggie-Chan
6/5/2002 c1 7Relena Peace
Oh my gosh! ^0^ That was so angst and,and, and, just plain depressing! ^^;; It made me sad when I read it. It actually makes me feel really sorry for anyone whoever feels that way. And that says something, because I am the type of person who hates pitty and hates people feeling sorry for other people (don't ask, long story). This was a great poem. I'd give it a 9 1/2 out of ten. Ten being awsome of course. Great job. Write more poems!

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