for in the still of the night7/23/2003 c1 imajine182
hey...i really like this poem...u address something that's very real...i love ur language..u use the word "fierce" two lines in a row...if u'r going for the repitition, that's good...but of course that depends on ur style cuz for my own poetry i try to avoid using the same word except w/ distinct structural repitition..i might also take out the first and be for "he has never felt such fierce love" it might flow a little better but like i said it's all up to u! love ur poetry and never ever stop writing!
hey...i really like this poem...u address something that's very real...i love ur language..u use the word "fierce" two lines in a row...if u'r going for the repitition, that's good...but of course that depends on ur style cuz for my own poetry i try to avoid using the same word except w/ distinct structural repitition..i might also take out the first and be for "he has never felt such fierce love" it might flow a little better but like i said it's all up to u! love ur poetry and never ever stop writing!
2/27/2003 c1 
2cinder's rose
That's beautiful! I love it- you've made a relationship into something fastasy-ish. You are truly gifted with words.
2cinder's roseThat's beautiful! I love it- you've made a relationship into something fastasy-ish. You are truly gifted with words.
5/18/2002 c1 mikae77 too lazy to sign in
*cries*
i'll tell my brother to read this. It's very sweet and well-written
mikae77
*cries*
i'll tell my brother to read this. It's very sweet and well-written
mikae77