
5/21/2002 c4 Ms Urania
Love it so far. Please update. Hmmm...constructive criticism might be that Joel needs to be fleshed out a bit more as a character. Otherwise, next chapter please.
Love it so far. Please update. Hmmm...constructive criticism might be that Joel needs to be fleshed out a bit more as a character. Otherwise, next chapter please.
5/19/2002 c4
9Spookie
constructive criticism... constructive criticism... all I can say is just make sure you read before you post, some parts are a bit confusing wording-wise, or you were typing real fast and skipped some words. Other that that, awesome! Great character.

constructive criticism... constructive criticism... all I can say is just make sure you read before you post, some parts are a bit confusing wording-wise, or you were typing real fast and skipped some words. Other that that, awesome! Great character.
5/13/2002 c2
32The one and only STAR
Love it, as usual. Now I had NOT read this part before, so was quite thrilled to see that you'd updated. Very nice ^_^. *hugs Echo* More?

Love it, as usual. Now I had NOT read this part before, so was quite thrilled to see that you'd updated. Very nice ^_^. *hugs Echo* More?
5/12/2002 c2
5Elek Devlin
I'm really enjoying your story so far. It gets me into Robin's mindset and it has just started out wonderfully.
Please keep posting more of this story (other wise the world will be done an injustice), and Robin, quite frankly, kicks serious butt.

I'm really enjoying your story so far. It gets me into Robin's mindset and it has just started out wonderfully.
Please keep posting more of this story (other wise the world will be done an injustice), and Robin, quite frankly, kicks serious butt.
5/12/2002 c2 Leende
Great story! More please!
Great story! More please!
5/12/2002 c1
32The one and only STAR
Hey, you've showed me this story before! No worries, I still love it. More?

Hey, you've showed me this story before! No worries, I still love it. More?