for In Your Imagination4/23/2003 c1 Chantelle Elle
Okay... wow! This is unbelievable! Lils, I really really love this poem... it's so beautiful! I can't describe it... it's... wow! All the words form pictures inside my head and I'm in that place when I read it... a place in my imagination where I can escape to... this poem is wonderful! WELL DONE! I'M SO PROUD OF YOU! YOU'RE AWESOME AT POETRY! CONTINUE!
Okay... wow! This is unbelievable! Lils, I really really love this poem... it's so beautiful! I can't describe it... it's... wow! All the words form pictures inside my head and I'm in that place when I read it... a place in my imagination where I can escape to... this poem is wonderful! WELL DONE! I'M SO PROUD OF YOU! YOU'RE AWESOME AT POETRY! CONTINUE!
11/7/2002 c1 
8Posi
ahh, the stereotypes...
no, seriously (I use that word too much, don't mind me) this poem is really NICE and very comfortable and still magical. Personally, I'm more of a maniacal man-slaughtering unicorn type, but still, I have to appreciate good descriptions and RHYME! (*shudder* not with a fox.. not in a box... not in a house... please! I can't take this anymore! er... sorry... hehe...)
-Posi
8Posiahh, the stereotypes...
no, seriously (I use that word too much, don't mind me) this poem is really NICE and very comfortable and still magical. Personally, I'm more of a maniacal man-slaughtering unicorn type, but still, I have to appreciate good descriptions and RHYME! (*shudder* not with a fox.. not in a box... not in a house... please! I can't take this anymore! er... sorry... hehe...)
-Posi
5/19/2002 c1 Ariana3
Awww! That sounds like such a nice place! I love your descriptions. You made it sound like paradise. Excellent job! :O)
Awww! That sounds like such a nice place! I love your descriptions. You made it sound like paradise. Excellent job! :O)
5/17/2002 c1 6QueenStrata
Love your poem. I'd ramble on and on about how much I love it, but I've got more stuff to do.
6QueenStrataLove your poem. I'd ramble on and on about how much I love it, but I've got more stuff to do.
5/17/2002 c1 3Emerald Eyes2
Wow Lils... (this is Elle btw) that was glamarous. Sorry, I feel like using strange words like those, but this poem was really lovely. It rhymed really prettily, and the subject was brilliant. I also really love its descriptions. This was fantastic, brilliant and really, really, sweet. Well done!
3Emerald Eyes2Wow Lils... (this is Elle btw) that was glamarous. Sorry, I feel like using strange words like those, but this poem was really lovely. It rhymed really prettily, and the subject was brilliant. I also really love its descriptions. This was fantastic, brilliant and really, really, sweet. Well done!
5/16/2002 c1 12All Mighty Terrestrial
You have enough imagination and whimsy for ten people! It's nice of you to try and cheer your friend up. Good job! (I always enjoy your poetry.)
12All Mighty TerrestrialYou have enough imagination and whimsy for ten people! It's nice of you to try and cheer your friend up. Good job! (I always enjoy your poetry.)
5/16/2002 c1 16Xaviera Xylira
You know every time I read your poetry, every single time, I feel such an uplifting sense of bliss and enchantment. Like your words transport me to a fantasy land that everyone wishes was true. Your poetry is soothing, Lily, and it's so easily flowing, with not so many complications. It's a wonderful piece of freedom. This was so gloriously beautiful and amazing. The human language and vocabulary simply don't hold the words strong enough to desribe what you create. The imagery you make, the scenes, the comfort that your words bring; they're all so completely enticing, Lily, and I truly admire that. Your poetry does wonders for my soul. Thank you. For everything.
16Xaviera XyliraYou know every time I read your poetry, every single time, I feel such an uplifting sense of bliss and enchantment. Like your words transport me to a fantasy land that everyone wishes was true. Your poetry is soothing, Lily, and it's so easily flowing, with not so many complications. It's a wonderful piece of freedom. This was so gloriously beautiful and amazing. The human language and vocabulary simply don't hold the words strong enough to desribe what you create. The imagery you make, the scenes, the comfort that your words bring; they're all so completely enticing, Lily, and I truly admire that. Your poetry does wonders for my soul. Thank you. For everything.
5/16/2002 c1 Birdie
My God, Choco. You are so amazing. I thought you were incredible when I first read your poems and stories. I didn't think anyone could get any better, but you've proved me wrong. Your poetry is so entrancing. It's description is just flawless and it always takes me a bit to realize that I'm still sitting in a computer chair and not somewhere mystical that you created. It's so gripping and powerful. It's beautiful. It's truly beautiful. I hope that you know that.
My God, Choco. You are so amazing. I thought you were incredible when I first read your poems and stories. I didn't think anyone could get any better, but you've proved me wrong. Your poetry is so entrancing. It's description is just flawless and it always takes me a bit to realize that I'm still sitting in a computer chair and not somewhere mystical that you created. It's so gripping and powerful. It's beautiful. It's truly beautiful. I hope that you know that.