for Everything8/26/2003 c3 
54Werecat99
Loved this one, especially the creation of the black orbs and the reaction to the crime they witnessed.
54Werecat99Loved this one, especially the creation of the black orbs and the reaction to the crime they witnessed.
6/12/2003 c1 Werecat99
This first chapter was simply beautifiul and sad at the same time. I liked the concept of the little moments stored away in the time bubbles. It is simply captivating as an image.
The last couple of lines were thrilling. And i is a very original and enchanting idea you had here.
Good work.
This first chapter was simply beautifiul and sad at the same time. I liked the concept of the little moments stored away in the time bubbles. It is simply captivating as an image.
The last couple of lines were thrilling. And i is a very original and enchanting idea you had here.
Good work.
2/23/2003 c6 6Strider Hunter
Again, an intriguing idea. This whole piece read in a lyrical manner, and I liked the way each paragraph flowed into the next. I'm *really* not used to reading fantasy stories yet, so this was a good experience for me.
Weird, yes, but certainly not crossing the bounds into the ludicrous.
6Strider HunterAgain, an intriguing idea. This whole piece read in a lyrical manner, and I liked the way each paragraph flowed into the next. I'm *really* not used to reading fantasy stories yet, so this was a good experience for me.
Weird, yes, but certainly not crossing the bounds into the ludicrous.
7/13/2002 c1 Strider Hunter
Dee, your idea is intriguing. It reminds me of the ancient Greeks' (Aristotle or Plato, I forget which one) idea of the True Forms, where everything in existence has a perfect "prototype" on which everything is modeled after. For example, every type of rock we see in the world is an imperfect replica of the True Form of Rock.
See what kind of useless knowledge I have? Give thanks to my ancient philosophy course!
Dee, your idea is intriguing. It reminds me of the ancient Greeks' (Aristotle or Plato, I forget which one) idea of the True Forms, where everything in existence has a perfect "prototype" on which everything is modeled after. For example, every type of rock we see in the world is an imperfect replica of the True Form of Rock.
See what kind of useless knowledge I have? Give thanks to my ancient philosophy course!
5/31/2002 c2 7Enchanted Bohemian
This is soooo like some of the bizarre things I think up.
I really liked it. Eery, serene, obscure...it seems to make perfect sense and yet make none all at the same time!
Please write more! This is such a good idea and I personnally think you've handled it well in a very unique way.
7Enchanted BohemianThis is soooo like some of the bizarre things I think up.
I really liked it. Eery, serene, obscure...it seems to make perfect sense and yet make none all at the same time!
Please write more! This is such a good idea and I personnally think you've handled it well in a very unique way.
5/18/2002 c1 85Sabeth the Dreamslayer
'tis good! i got a nice visual picture from all that :P keep it up.
85Sabeth the Dreamslayer'tis good! i got a nice visual picture from all that :P keep it up.