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3/10/2006 c1 Mark
I like this sort of poetry because it doesn't want to explain something you don't really know. It questions, and reminds us on our own questions we cannot answer, too. So there lies a lot of truth in it. I know this critic might not help much, but it is an encouragement. Go on! :)
6/7/2003 c1 2Platerair Queen
Indeed! I was replying to your last sentence.

Why do we kill? I don't know. The fear of not being dominating, I guess. We all fear the powerful, those who can ruin us, so we seek to become the ones we hate the most.

That opinion of mine wasn't scary. . . . I suppose to other people it would be. I think that my opinion is true, in a sense. Though, truly, what is the answer?
8/29/2002 c1 Rohali
touching and gives a message i totally agree with, nice work
5/22/2002 c1 Elly And The Gundam Wing Fan
Good, climactic ending! ^_^

This is my favorite of your poems so far!
5/19/2002 c1 4Silly Goose Publications
true. very true. i like.
5/19/2002 c1 14AetherIris
whoa...really cool. I liked it alot
5/18/2002 c1 13Logtu Lagi
...it's very real...

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