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4/1/2003 c1 53Artemis Astralstar
good
7/16/2002 c1 Guess
I like the whole idea of the poem. The first verse is the best if to think about r+r. I personally that a verse that rhymes should be combined with verses that don't rhyme. Otherwise, it's a well written poem that makes me cry about the world every time i read it. Ok, almost every time. lol
5/19/2002 c1 36xo0Jayne0ox
0_0 wow... I'm 13 too (14 on tuesday) but my poems suck compaired to yours. As quoted earlier from your other reviwers, you have a nice use of imagery. Maybe one day I'll be as good you.. nah!

Keep it up!

-Jayne/x
5/19/2002 c1 22Gevo
Great poem! I love the symbolism and imagery you use. Please write more poems, I'm going to read them! (Pleeeeaaaase?)
5/18/2002 c1 1Saru Kada
Nice poem! I like your use of imagery and symbolism. Keep up the good work. I hope to see another poem by you out soon.

~SK

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